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    tyro : ] - Combo Animation + Cityscape Showcase

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    Here they are, nothing special. Rate me on the newer animations, the older ones are just up there for the hardcore, non-existant tyro fans. I could use some advice on uploading lol, I'm kind of just winging it at the moment. Anyway, enjoy : ]

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    - Combo


    Newest
    - Walking/Panning Test (Showcasing Cityscape)
    Another walking test to keep me on my toes I suppose. I wanted to try panning in this animation as well. I'm also showcasing my new cityscape in this animation. Its traced from a picture someone else posted in the request section, called CityScape 2 or something.


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    - Combo
    FINALLY, a new animation. I've been working on a combo sort of thing for some time now and I finally made one that I like. It's okay I suppose, its a bit off in some parts, I know, but there will obviously be bits of it that aren't right that I need others to point out for me. And yes, I know, the guy moves down the page slightly, couldn't help it :P. And I got super-duper lazy at the end. Here you go.
    http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/7500/combo7.gif

    - Punch Test
    Punch test.. nothing technical, let me know what you think : ]
    http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3233/punch1.gif

    - Running Test
    More dust shaking, simple running test, let me know what you think : ]
    http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/6862/running1.gif

    Not So New
    - Walking Test
    I needed to shake off the dust a little bit so here's a really simple walking test, tips and constructive critisism would be appreciated : ]
    http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/9929/walking1t.gif

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    Re: tyro ; ]

    running test is up, let me know wat u think : ]

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    Re: tyro ; ]

    The running test is pretty well done,it just needs to be eased more.Do that and it'll be great,just make sure you don't over ease it.

    The walking test is good too,just way too short to judge.

    It's good that you're doing basics first though,keep doing that before you jump into fighting and other complicated stuff,that's the problem with a lot of beginners.

    Good job on those.

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    Re: tyro ; ]

    Running test is good
    Just ease it a little more, also that front leg looks like it's just hitting the ground and going up again D:


    When I do a run, I start the guy off already in a run position, move his legs up a bit, move the back joint, and the arms, then move the arms and legs even less on the next frame, and move the back again
    Then the legs go down a bit, and the origin moves down slightly arms go down slightly, back moves.
    Now you space the legs a bit, move the arms more, move the back again, and move the origin down a bit more.
    Now the legs should cross, arms should look as one on the back, and the back moves.
    Finally the origin moves up slightly, the arms move out, and the legs cross over completely so they're like...apart from each other now.



    Walk test:to rate it better, it'd be better if it was a loop, the foot placement seemed ok, no shakiness that I could see, but the back was incredibly stiff D:

    Keep animating olol.
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    Re: tyro ; ]

    If you just started Pivot, that's really good for a beginner. I suggest you go look at some tutorials, especially Baha's. That will really help you. On the running one, when he is in the air and has his arms/legs fully extended outwards, you should slow it down and then slowly bring then towards the body again. That's called easing. Just keep practicing and you will get better! Courtesy? (In my sig)

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    Re: tyro ; ]

    the runz are pretty good...i mean a little below pretty good...u med beg
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    Re: tyro ; ]

    strong start for begining... Again.
    your running is smooth but when in mid air you make him decsend way to quickly.
    & you walking is hard to tell because it is way to short to know.
    overall,
    Running, High, little more improvement
    Walking, Med, More longer next time.

    Soo keep it up & youll be an inter in no time.

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    Re: tyro ; ]

    It's pretty good for a beginner, I would say med-high beg. The running is way better than my runs, haha.

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    Re: tyro : ] - Punch Test Up

    punch test up , let me know what u think (Y)


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    Re: tyro : ] - Punch Test Up

    the running and the walking test's were good i think the running lacked a little easing but it was cool anyway in the punch test it looked like he was sliding his leg because u didn't move the knee at all other than that i looked gr8 deffinetly med begginer
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