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    really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    this is a animation im putting in a contest not finished though please tell me what u think and ideas for what should happen next cus im stumped lol

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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    You're really good but stiffness is your problem.

    So when your moving use easing like start out with small movements and then bigger movements then slowing down to small movements again. It makes animations really smooth and nice so try to do it. And I notice you used the combo from the YouTube fighting tutorial move by SilentRaj, the move is good but try to make your own combos so it can be original. Your effects are good, keep doing them as long as possible because when you are a higher rank in Pivot your animations will be really good with them.

    Your rank is currently Med Low-Beginner.
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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    Dude your crazy if your saying High med beginner. You not even med beginner yet. Sorry but you have bad stiffness problem and I did see some easing in some places, but very little. I suggest you see some tutorials from our tutorial's section.

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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    Quote Originally Posted by An Alien
    Dude your crazy if your saying High med beginner. You not even med beginner yet. Sorry but you have bad stiffness problem and I did see some easing in some places, but very little. I suggest you see some tutorials from our tutorial's section.
    Lol yeah I was thinking of something else when I put that.
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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    ouch i thought i did much better then i did eh oh well -__-

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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    you have allot of stifness
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    Re: really cool fight please view and commen (unfinished)

    You only have a few major problems. Stiffness, in which you should move every red dot in a frame, and two, flow, in which you should keep everything going without many stops or many slows in the fighting. I say low-med beginner.


 

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