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  1. #1
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    SilverWing's Thread

    [center:26lai47f][/center:26lai47f]I'm Silverwing
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    Latest
    http://pivotup.com/files/zsebj8oy.gif

    Newish
    http://pivotup.com/files/ogaedw9u.gif

    Will keep you updated
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  2. #2
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    Re: SilverWing's Thread

    The latest one isn't much to comment on.

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    Re: SilverWing's Thread

    Your animation needs much much smoothing,
    as well you lack the basics on pivot.
    I'm guessing you just started.
    Your animation also has alot of choppyness
    and stiffness.
    The camera work is just..just ..you need work man.

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    Re: SilverWing's Thread

    You need to learn the basics although i like your ideas.

    Choppyness
    Stiffness
    Easing

    You need to work on these. May i suggest you look at the tutorials for help.
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    Re: SilverWing's Thread

    lol, those are quite shaky and very stiff, you should work more on your basics, physics and everything
    Aprox,
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