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    Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

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    [center:1a8gzjp9]Please consider to view and evaluate my animations.
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    [center:1a8gzjp9]Improvements: [/center:1a8gzjp9]

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    [center:1a8gzjp9]Running Test, Improvement: Smoothing.[/center:1a8gzjp9]



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    [center:1a8gzjp9]I don't have very many animations; for
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    And feel free to tell if I've improved within
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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    I'm not here to argue this time. Let me tell you what to fix: First, you have loads of shakyness. To fix this, move every joint at least a little. You also need to ease. You barely ease, therefore your animations are choppy. To fix chopyness, apply easing, :4. Overall, your rank is definaetly not high beginner as you said you were, but you are low- med beginner.

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    I agree with above. There is shakiness and you need to ease. Its also stiff which you can reduce by moving every joint. Look at some tutorials to learn. Baha's is probably the best IMO.
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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    Quote Originally Posted by skiller
    I'm not here to argue this time. Let me tell you what to fix: First, you have loads of shakyness. To fix this, move every joint at least a little. You also need to ease. You barely ease, therefore your animations are choppy. To fix chopyness, apply easing, :4. Overall, your rank is definaetly not high beginner as you said you were, but you are low- med beginner.

    Thanks man, sorry for flaming
    you in the first place.
    I took your advice and eased some animations,
    such as the running test I just put up
    in my thread.

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    It's ok, and you need to work on your run. He glides across, but in reality, youre foot actually stays in one plave for a certain amunt of time.

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    the running one was good but the only thig that ruinned it is the gliding.

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    Quote Originally Posted by skiller
    It's ok, and you need to work on your run. He glides across, but in reality, youre foot actually stays in one plave for a certain amunt of time.

    I see that now. Thanks.
    I'll work more on it, and update.
    I would give courtesy.
    But I can't seem to find
    your thread?

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    Whoa, at first I was looking at your older anims, and im just like yawn... then im like well whatever may aswell look a the new one. What I was surprised to see, was how you have improved, and how the Naruto one held my interest I mean 1500 frames takes some commitment, I see you used a bit of heavyspacing, and it was pretty good, a bit of easing , however I dont know if it was on purpose or not, your effects where real good, but your physics need some work just go to Phoenixs tutorial in the tutorial master list for physics. All in all your new one was pretty good, but was stiff in the back. just try to move every joint in each frame, and if its innescesary by like 1/12th of a inch, or centimeter whatever you measure in.

    Youre doing fine, and here at DD we help you become so much better so fast.


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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    The steps for the run were to big for such a small distance.
    but you're doing good. Keep it up!

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    Re: Sincerelyned's Thread (New)

    Very Good.
    in your new running test he slides across the ground to much.
    med beg.
    try lots of other things and you will get to high beg quickly.
    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=62970

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