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Thread: LOCK PLEASE

  1. #1
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    LOCK PLEASE

    Just wanting to get an idea of what rank I am, and also please tell me what I need to improve on and how, thanks.

    [attachment=1:2kzmn7sv]Animation 2.gif[/attachment:2kzmn7sv]

    Charge and blast.
    [attachment=0:2kzmn7sv]animation 4.gif[/attachment:2kzmn7sv]

    Other Animation(s) I have done.
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    Wall Break Attempt - http://**********.com/img/1246843593.gif
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1246761497.png[/img]
    My Thread - viewtopic.php?f=2&t=63014

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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    HEY WASSUP ITS SIZOR97
    so anyways keep working on easing (what i taught u)
    and smoothness yeah

    COURTESEY
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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    it's hard to rank and anim that is really short, and also, it's completelly stiff and uneased, everything was bad (no offenses) Read some tutorials about pivot, like, baha's


    Low begginer

    Courtesy??
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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    Nice!It is very short, so it is hard to rank this, but i think you are low-med beginner.
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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    The anim was pretty good. IMO i dont think it was that stiff but it was definately uneased. But the effect was awsome. Look at tutorial to find what ease is if you dont know.
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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    Medium begginer.

    Bit stiff and didn't really like the beam. You should stop with effects till you master the basics for example, punches and stuff like that. Keep it up.

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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    Try to add tremors when you do a strong beam (shake everything up and down), it wil make it look a lot more powerful. Good to see you're trying to get some reflection from the light. Nice try on that, and also a nice try on the 3D of the arm when he twists it around. When he was walking it looked more like he was tip-toeing. Remember that if you are walking your feet usually go flat on the ground. When you dod a beam try to keep everything in the same colour but just in different shades. So that yellow spark should have been a dark orange or a dark red, then it would have gone nicer with the beam. Remember to try and add a charge up if you can, like have him holding his hand out and energy is going towards his hand that creates a ball and then it turns into a beam. But jolly good work, keep it up

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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    The walking was all stiff and uneased,the arm was uneased but i liked the idea.The effects were nice for this animation and its always a good thing to use in animations if your good at it.Low to med beginner for now.

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    Re: What Rank am I ?

    the beam looked to underpowered....maybe adding a tremor or a shaking effect/flash would made it seem better. other than that, read baha's tutorial for walking, easing, and all the basics.
    low begginer, but you will get better.
    courtesy? D:

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    Re: My Thread

    you seem to have a good grasp of what effecs and 3D should look like, try practicing more and keep each joint moving each fram or i will look stiff and ease(even though you've probably heard this alot)
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1261331659.gif[/img]


 
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