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    MY animation(s)

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    just some tests i made:
    heavy spacing test





    easing test
    http://pivotup.com/files/mex3v01j.gif

    a broly test
    http://pivotup.com/files/axnugyil.gif

    (a remake of a tribute i made for pivotpro333 and chukanimations)
    http://pivotup.com/files/nj3fzul0.gif

    backflip test
    http://pivotup.com/files/jdv2enfi.gif




    here are the links:


    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uD7Z_HW46lQ
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RDQh623N0eU
    backfliptest:
    http://pivotup.com/files/rzjmcg7y.gif

    i"ll add more later when i get some constructive critism or some other comments


    Please rank me/help me with tips
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    Re: MY animation(s)

    That was pretty good. To me it seemed fairly smooth except in a couple of cases. The reactions were nice and the effect were good. Just remember to ease but thats good for a beginner.
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    Re:Re: MY animation(s)

    thanks about that and yeah i need to be smoother can u rank me??
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    Re: MY animation(s)

    that was preatty good, you may want to master the basics before you move into more advaced stuff. Work on stiffness and all that. The effects were preatty good tho.
    I'd say ur a low-high begginer.
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    Re: MY animation(s)

    Update!!!












    just some tests i made:
    heavy spacing test





    easing test
    http://pivotup.com/files/mex3v01j.gif

    a broly test
    http://pivotup.com/files/axnugyil.gif

    (a remake of a tribute i made for pivotpro333 and chukanimations)
    http://pivotup.com/files/nj3fzul0.gif

    backflip test
    http://pivotup.com/files/jdv2enfi.gif
    The One Who Waits, Wins


    made by ulcatron

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    Re: MY animation(s)

    update
    gun test thnx to Chanie for the tut





    credz to jon bert De8struction and me for stks
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    Re: MY animation(s)

    Your newest was pretty good, although the foot placement was off, and it was a little choppy and when he threw the gun up in the air the stickfigures back moved stopped then moved again.
    Made it look bad. also you could of tried a better gun effect the one you used was just a stk coming on and off.

    Going onto your heavy spacing. it was pretty good i suppose still some choppy and stiffness but it was ok.
    But i think it was bad how on the last combo he stayed it the air when he flipped you should of made him land it would look a lot better.

    Your favorite was pretty bad, not your best. It was very stiff, choppy and wasn't eased.
    You got to get rid of the stiffness, it's easy to just move every joint. easing and choppyness is also one of your big problems easing is pretty easing to solve just look at this pivot file.
    And observe it. (Click here).
    Well keep animating and you'll improve.
    Keep it up.

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    Re: MY animation(s)

    thnx for the ppiv ill check it out now and um can u give me a rank?
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    Re: MY animation(s)

    Man, your fight movs are really good!
    The only thing you need is to improvise your easing, it's bad..
    All the effects are great, i like them
    improvise your easing, and fix more the foot of the sticks on the floor, also the gun on the hands of the guy.
    only this

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    Re: MY animation(s)

    Bump* update
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