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    Pauls Thread UPDATE: worst chase-scene ever

    The Newest:
    running test(ignore the default)

    Link

    Others:
    first one after pause
    Kick
    Ball play
    not finished

    Credits to
    bert
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    the guy who made the 'midget'
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    Re: "Comeback"

    Not bad...nice bg. But it was very uneased, making the chalk look shaky. Very nice for a 20 month comeback though! Keep it up, you will get better fast.
    EDIT: Also I saw some foot placement problems. Look at this tut: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u083xquzzzk

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    Re: "Comeback"

    your foot placement sucked. and it was very shaky. im not a big fan of your style. but uh...idk its just me. work on easing, smoothing and stuff like that, get back to basics for now. courts?
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    Re: "Comeback"

    thats for the feedback and the tips.
    i just uploaded a new animation. i hope i improved my foot placement..tried hard
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    Re: "Comeback"

    Pretty nice, although it is a bit slow and the blurs didnt look good. The slowness kind of ruined it, but it still wasnt a bad anim. Just do normal movements until you get better again and practice your spacing. Overall a pretty good anim.
    Courtz?

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    Re: "Comeback"

    Nice new one it was slow,which made the blur look wierd,but either way it was good

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    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=63095
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    Re: "Comeback"

    Hmmmmmmm. I can see great potential in this. The stance-return on the kick seems a bit stiff, and the walking needs work, but you're very good for a beginner. Try posting more animations. And remember to take your time. Keep it up! ^_^

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    Re: "Comeback"

    Well eased in the beginning but near the end it was choppy, it was also pretty stiff but you have many great ideas, once you learn and read a few tutorials you will be throwing animations at us non stop. Keep working at em man you will get better!

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    Re: "Comeback"

    thanks vor the cc.
    added another one. not really good. landings are off but i hope its not shaky and stiff like my first one
    ratings please
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    Re: "Comeback"

    You still got the basics down, sort of. But its pretty boring and the reactions are bad.
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