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  1. #1
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    New Animations! Please comment!

    Hey guys, this is my first ever post on Darkdemon.
    Ive never made a pivot and posted it ANYWHERE online for that matter.

    Ok, Please tell me if ive posted anything wrong, ill be happy to fix it.
    Admin's please tell me if im breaking any rules, ill be happy to fix that too.

    So here is a link to my animation.
    (Flippyguy)
    http://**********.com/img/1246760676.gif

    (SUPERBALL!)
    http://**********.com/img/1246772792.gif

    (Physics test!)
    http://**********.com/img/1246854869.gif

    (Running Test)
    Sorry guys i really couldn't be bothered looping it.
    http://**********.com/img/1246861285.gif

    (Jump test)
    http://**********.com/img/1246870439.gif

    Please, constructive critisism. And thanks for all your comments + views
    Im'a Firin' mah Lazor!

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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    it was pretty good.it was pretty smooth,it was stiff and i didn't get the part where the guy bounced back,it was too crazy.
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    Thanks for your comment
    Uhm, the guy is doing a flip, Which looks pretty stupid.
    Lol.
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    Come on guys! Please comment and tell me what i must work on.
    Courtesy IS returned.
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    I would say that your anims are fairly smooth with minor cases of stiffness. Also on the wall flip... You should of tried a backflip because it looks like its a frontflip. But thats just me.
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    they were ok but, you need to work on physics most i think, the ball seemed to move kind of wierd sometimes when it was hit
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    Welcome to DD and don't double post lol. You're flip was very nice for a begginer. It was smooth and eased, just a bit stiff while he was in the air though. Medium begginer. Keep it up.

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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    well for starters, lets say not bad, liked the physics test, it showed some realism(even though the small dude, looked like he barley lift a dime, but thats just me...shoot, i just typed that....um I'm too lazy to back space...yeah)

    though on the ball animation, it seemed either the ball's reaction or the sticks reaction were off, could quite put my finger on it...just make sure you work on reaction.

    on the flippy, when he did, what I call a cart wheel not a flip in its entirely, one physics were off, for he seemed to stand on the wall a little too long and the flip it self looked like his head remained in one spot, so when you do a flip, make sure that the main node(orange one) is being revolved around some what, or what ever.

    I'd say med-beginner, but we need more ani's, so give some basics, like walking and running and jumping, so we can see if you need some help and just have a look at Baha's tut in tutorial section.

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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    Thanks heaps for the comments guys!
    Trying my best to return courtesy!
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    Re: First Ever Time, Critisism please :)

    Bump!
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