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  1. #1
    Old Newbie nicemans1's Avatar
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    ma threat *update*

    ma treat i hope it is good and pls rate its from new to old

    archer attack

    skate bails *ouch*

    my second awesome jump

    ownege jump


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    dont play with fireworks


    skater

    this one is with sounds now


    random shooting stuff

    dominoes

    shooting stuff

    shooting
    this 1 is dutch.
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    Re: ma threat

    Stiff, uneased and in that shooting animation, when the guy picked up the shotgun or whatever the way he was holding it was really weird. Nice work for a begginer though. Keep it up man. Low begginer.

  3. #3
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    Re: ma threat

    The anims were ok. But you might want to decrease the stiffness and ease more. Also when shooting use a singular line which would represent the speed of the bullet because it doesnt look fast if it isnt off screen the next frame. But thats just me.
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    Re: ma threat

    For one post, and being a n00b cake, you are not bad.

    Great colours for first animations, yet they are heavy on stiffness, sorry.

    Look at spacing tutorials, and when your guy fires arrows/bullets or anything, they need to go a lot faster than they do. Here is a regular bullet compared to your bullet.
    Reg. D-------D-------O
    Yours. D--D--D--D--D-O

    If you make it much faster, taking out frames, you will be a lot better off. Your animations are good though, i'd say low-beg, but if you keep up the work you have now, you will be med-beg/high-beg in NO time. Til' then, courtesy?

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    Re: ma threat

    you need to work on your reactions, like when he gets shot, the bullet goes through, 4 seconds later the blood appears, 5 seconds later he falls over,
    i dont know whether this was a failed attempt at comedy, but try to have the guy fall as the bullet hits him, as the blood spurts. all in one go.
    try hard you will improve
    low begginner.
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    Re: ma threat *update* 5 mins later update again lol

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    Re: ma threat *update* 5 mins later update again lol

    bumzars againzors
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    Re: ma threat *update*

    bump
    my thread
    life is like a box of chocolates....
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    Re: ma threat *update*

    My courtesy please

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    Re: ma threat *update*

    Put more frames between the movements
    apply easing on the movements and work on physics
    Read some tutorial, and keep training

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