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    ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    [center:2lli3rhi]Stickied Animashuns![/center:2lli3rhi]

    Ive been lookin at some tuts and stuff.

    A wierd combo...my own stickman..like the stick, not the anim so much
    http://pivotup.com/files/ydmu1gpw.piv

    A 4 punch combo, i likey
    http://pivotup.com/files/s9fmavh7.piv

    A kick combo - creds to Jon for the wu stick. i know the ending sucks...
    http://pivotup.com/files/qexg749m.piv

    A FLIPPY THINGY
    http://pivotup.com/files/8drbg5ik.piv

    The Assasinator - First anim ever - background try - all sticks except the sniper are mine.
    http://pivotup.com/files/2s8fkgil.piv

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    All of your animations are extremely good, i like how you know how to make sticks, like in the first animation, the backgrounds were very good, the snipe part was cool, on that flip one, it was cool, abit slow but its k, i see u getting epic real soon just look up some tutorials like bahamuts one, heard of it? you can find it in the tutorials section
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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    Welcome to DD man. Very nice animations for a begginer ( if you are one) Like he said ^ the flip was a bit slow very nice that you used you're own sticks, work on easing and especially stiffness since there was alot when he did the flip. Keep it up. Low - med begginer.

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    good animations, your BG usage is extremely good, your movements are nice, but they're shaky stiff choppy and uneased, also, try not sliding his foot, whch is called Footplacement, try making some tests and making longer animations, low begginer

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    I liked your animation's Stickied.

    For your first animations, not bad at all.

    Flippy Thing:
    The fade effect was pretty good, and the front flip was pretty good too. The thing that I didn't like was the added back flip at the end. I didn't like it much to be frank. The landing was uneased and the backflip was to forced.
    I know everyone says "Be realistic" but don't, only be realistic in physics, that's all. Barred-none it was good.

    The Assassinator:
    For your "First" animation, it was very good. Like Ram said, the background was good, the snipe part was awesome, and everything was cool. I am not going to rate that animation, because there was not much to rate.

    Do NOT look at Baha's tutorial, do NOT do what everyone says. It is good, but p2k's tutorial is WAY better. Honestly. It doesn't have broken links and messed up pictures. Baha's is not that good anymore. You can find p2k's tutorial link on my page.

    I liked your animations, they were good for your first ones.
    I liked how you started with a tutorial instead of shooting right for something gay. Good job.

    Keep it up and you will be High-Beginner.

    I would say Low-Beginner for right now SOULY based on the flip.
    More animashuns???

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    Ok Opti, thanks for the comment, and explaining in detail on what i need to work on. Ive improved my movements, will post a long animation soon.

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    BUMP!

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    No problem man

    Check out p2k's tutorial, it is one of the best out there man.

    Now tell me what I have to work on


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    And for your signature, instead of having that annoying ass link there, just do this:
    The Text inbetween the ]After The Link[ is what you will see. Just a tip

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    BUMP! New anim

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    Re: ....:::Stickied's Thread:::... - First Animashuns

    they're very nice
    very good movement's
    good idea's
    not much to say but yeah
    good job
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