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    IntrustinglyActive - 08.10.09 Somersault (FUCKING COMMENT)

    Buddies (that are still alive)
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    Pandy Man

    they all died

    NEW SHIZZIT

    08.10.09 - Somersault


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    08.07.09 - Roll kinda thingy


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    08.05.09 - Box animation
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    7/30/09 Believe it or not, my first ever "fight"
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    7.30.09 Crono Style
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    7.27.09 - Killer Wood
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    07.20.09 - Double Kick (also fixed GIF rate)
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    07.19.09 - Comeback Anim (also rust) (also no transparency)
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    [s:3h8ik83b]u suk

    ur anims r terible u shud quit now!!1[/s:3h8ik83b]

    That was pretty sick, but the splash was too quick and the beginning before he jumped was stiff.
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    I would say the beginning was a "just for fun" thingey, but it was quite impressive. However, I got to point out some stuff:

    When the ground that he bounced appeared, it seems like it didn't have power. If the stick wanted to fly that high, the ground should bend alot more. Also, I couldn't see when he started to fall down. Suddenly the water appeared under him, when it looked like he was flying upwards. The water hit was nice, and I loved the way the water "splashed". Really cool
    Although i think he went back up too fast. Other than that, it was nice. However, when you're making a comeback animation, I think you should use a different stick, not the simple easy-to-animate default stickman.

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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Crainbolt
    Something that I find distracting in your animation:
    I noticed that you started to have multiple frames with the same image on each near the end. I checked the .piv to confirm. IMO, that makes it look bad.
    Yeah, it's called double framing.

    Quote Originally Posted by Fyrren
    I would say the beginning was a "just for fun" thingey, but it was quite impressive. However, I got to point out some stuff:

    When the ground that he bounced appeared, it seems like it didn't have power. If the stick wanted to fly that high, the ground should bend alot more. Also, I couldn't see when he started to fall down. Suddenly the water appeared under him, when it looked like he was flying upwards. The water hit was nice, and I loved the way the water "splashed". Really cool
    Although i think he went back up too fast. Other than that, it was nice. However, when you're making a comeback animation, I think you should use a different stick, not the simple easy-to-animate default stickman.

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    He starts falling when he flips. Also, I was about to use a different .stk, but I decided to use the default instead. I think it might have been better with a different one, too.
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Crainbolt
    Quote Originally Posted by I A
    Yeah, it's called double framing.
    Yeah, and it really fucked your animation...in my humble opinion...
    I would really return your courtesy because I simply love your animations, but I would be bumping the thread and don't want to have it locked.
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    FFFUCK YOU IA

    YOU LOST OUR JOINT

    WHEN YOU WENT AWAY

    I JUST REMEMBER


    FFFFFFFUCK YOU
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    Quote Originally Posted by scool
    FFFUCK YOU IA

    YOU LOST OUR JOINT

    WHEN YOU WENT AWAY

    I JUST REMEMBER


    FFFFFFFUCK YOU
    Oops. Want to make a new one?
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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    Teh double framing in teh end was bad.
    So fix that :P
    You can smooth but there's not much to say because there's not much animated.

    I like the water splash

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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    It was ok, but when he jumped off of the diving board, the end of it bent at a weird angle. It goes a tiny bit to fast spacing wise, but otherwise i loved how you did the splash, and i like how you did the default floating with no transperencys. Around medium to high beginner.

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    Re: IntrustinglyActive - 07.19.09 Comeback Anim :D

    hey there. i've alot about you from a friend at school, he had an account here, his username was Noo. i haven't heard from him since the 4th, but he said you were good friend of his.

    ok, it looks like you have major rust. the jumping thing was a solid medium beginner. it was super stiff, the back was especially. (default)

    the double framing at the end didn't look very good, it made the animation choppier.
    i liked the splash, even though it could've used work.

    overall i say medium beginner. welcome back.
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