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    Opti's Thread. Birthday Today(9/14/09) Happy 18th!

    Another New Layout
    Shitty Fucking Music
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    5 Newest Animations
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    |Naru-Gay!|--GIF Rape--

    |Parkour|
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    |STOMP!|
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    |Elbow Punch|
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    My Favorite Animations

    |Squirt|
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    |Ow!|
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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Very good animations my favorite was the one on the top right lol.

    I wish i was good like you

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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Very good layout Opti, and your newest that bird is awesome movements on him are good but the throw could have more back into it, its a little stiff, keep up the good work, the easing is great.
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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Thank you kind sir.

    Any other comments, suggestions, plots, quarrels?
    I am open for suggestions/ Joint operations.

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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Hello Opti, your animations are good but some seem a LITTLE choppy, your effects are awesome but your general movements need work, you add colors to your animations which make your animations very entertaining, I say Med-High Beginner

    Courtesy, I have a new thread, (link for my thread is in my signiture)

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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Man you got some awesome shit on there man, i love the new layout.
    -That first one on the top was really nicely done, i see where u got ur transformation collab entry from lol. I don't really see anything that you could fix there ... it's awesome.
    -The noob one.. i looked at the first part of it and i was like " wtf is this" but then i got it lol. The run could have been better tho. Make him seem more hurried to get away from the explosion.
    -The ow one..wow... that was one of the most original animation's i've seen lately. The effect's were awesome, and that view was awesome. The green thing on the right really goes with it. The only sugestion i have is if u do something like that, maybe going left to right (like /\/\/\ ) lol retarded example, on the right side, that would make it seem a bit more busy, and tech like.
    -The preview is really nice. A lil stiff, but nice. Maybe show the dude getting shot?

    You're deffinatly high begginer, and you're gonna hit interz soon enough. Just work on the movements

    Courtesy ?
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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Squirt is not a preview. It is the animation I did for fun, I love animating things that are hard to animate.

    Thank you on all the comments. How far along are you on the Transformation collab? And if that collab fails, that's our joint together Mu ha ha ha ha.

    Any way, courtesy coming your way Lilyo.

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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    your newest animation is good, but its a tad shaky here and there. Like for instance the sticks back kinda shakes/fidgets as he throws the owl. How ever thats not major, you can easily easily fix that by editing the frames in which the bird is being tossed.

    The reaction and feather were great as well, just make sure your paying attention to the few joints the bird does have, b/c his feet were kinda weird during the last scene.


    Holy shit that's horrible criticism

    Courtesy? i understand if its rejected, heh
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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Seems that you improved with the layout, thats cool. On that bird one (your signature) it was good, the easing was done right, but there was stiffness. You have effects down, which is good. on the O is for Opti one, the water thing was abit off, and the flip lacked physics.
    overall med beginner
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    Re: Opti's New-er Thread. Check It Out. I Return Courtesy.

    Bumpdate.


 
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