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  1. #1
    H20
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    Battle of Pigford

    [center:2cwaqnp4]WELCOME TO MY THREAD EVERYONE!
    I am R.J./Twix, a 12 year old animator who lives in the USA.
    I been doing pivot since March 2008, but i took a recent break from pivot.
    Please enjoy my animations!!
    To be reminded i do return courtesy
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    [/center:2cwaqnp4][center:2cwaqnp4]Key:
    Regular - - Mmmk
    Italics - - Good
    Bold and Italics - - Very Good.





    Battle of Pigford
    I like this animation alot, continue? Not as good as my other movements though.


    9 Minutes
    I think it compares to some of the intermediate 9 minute animations..


    Lank vs Wu
    I love this one. Good?


    SquareZ Attack!
    I really like it. Long too.


    BAM!
    Eh..i dun really like it..


    Ketch it!!!
    Woo..i really like this one, cool?


    Kick in the Face
    Pretty good, I suck at reactions though.


    Effex..Continue?
    Look closely at the hands, lightning is surging through them.


    Lank Combo
    Just a punch and a kick at the same time.


    Lank Punch
    I really like it. I'm getting good with the dynamic camera, yayz!


    Lover Combo
    This is my first good combo.[/center:2cwaqnp4]
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    Re: R.J.'s New Thread. I Return Courtesy

    woot first reply!
    um ur anims r pretty good just a little stiff.
    but also very original

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    Re: R.J.'s New Thread. I Return Courtesy

    mmmmmmm... I'll say med---you--high begginer, the roll wasn't eased, a little stiff, but the rest is good!
    [center:1rg94ueb]courtesy?[/center:1rg94ueb]

    [center:1rg94ueb]Cilck my Dragon egg and you will get an awesome stick![/center:1rg94ueb]
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    Re: R.J.'s New Thread. I Return Courtesy

    Only one animation? :\

    Ok... I loved the background movements. Looks really cool. But when it get's to the flip, the spacing goes bad. The easing was terrible after the flip. But the kick was a ok at the end. Think of making your animation in realistic terms. The handstand wouldn't be able to last that long considering the momentum you put into the animation from the run and jump. Your animations don't flow much, they're kinda fluid.

    Nice... Medium - High beginner.

    Courtesy returned.
    [center:3jvto3gf]Merry Thread - mas![/center:3jvto3gf]
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    Re: R.J.'s New Thread. I Return Courtesy

    Pretty sweet.
    The movements were generally good.
    Just a bit of foot placement problem on the second combo guy.
    The flip was kind of a bit sudden when it stop it looked a little odd try easy the last movement as much as you can.
    Everything seems to be pretty good somethings you might need to work on but so far so good.


    High beginner.

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    Re: R.J.'s New Thread. I Return Courtesy

    it's good
    but ithink yyour a litlle bit to lazy and you hav to work on your easing
    keep it going

    courtseny???
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    Re: Micker Tricks

    Micker Tricks.

    Why Micker? That is an odd name. In any case, good job.

    Nice drawing the fat little fella, but it was a bit..odd for me.

    I didn't like the run at all, it didn't look good, to be frank, or dick I guess. The kick was to heavily spaced, and the easing on that one was bad, very bad.

    Medium-Beginner.
    Check out the DDBC2 thread, last few pages and check out my Preview, give me pointers that will help me.

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    Re: Micker Tricks

    Well, base is cute and all, but I don't think you'll keep using it. Animation-wise you haven't shown much, just few basic actions. Movement errors were pointed out by others, so there's no need to retype them. Try to make something longer, then we will see what you're made of. Actually, it looks like you have much potential, but you're not using it. Do it now.

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    Re: Micker Tricks

    NEW LAYOUT.
    i also return courtesy.
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    Re: Micker Tricks

    hmm... thats a weird base. It looks similar to the one from the New York 21something
    joint, but is animated very differently. in your newest one i loved the roll but the running was strange and uneased. nest was an original idea but there were so many camera changes it was hard to see what was going on. when the laser/bullet/whatever it was hit the nest the smoke was completely horrible, it needs particles and should have faded to white instead of black. swordsman was well done, liked the smoothness, easing, and trails, but it lacked force. maybe part of that is the fact that your base has such short limbs?
    overall i agree with doctor, you need to try effects and new moves. also, you need to spend more time going back and editing anims. i saw many spots where you got lazy that could be easily fixed.
    high beg, the only thing keeping you out of inter is laziness and lack of effects.
    courtesy?

    ALL YOU BASE ARE BELONG TO CHUCK NORRIS.
    BECAUSE EVERYTHING BELONGS TO CHUCK NORRIS.

    Teh animations of THE. - courtesy?


 
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