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Thread: AWwolf's Thread

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    AWwolf's Thread

    Animations

    All Sticks From Droidz

    [center:3765pkru]Newest:[/center:3765pkru]


    -Short Punch Loop. Comment on the movement, is there anything i can improve on?



    - Short Test Animation


    -Iincomplete Animation, Trying to be Dramatic.


    - My Fav of out the recent 4. The end is a jog, because i fail at run.

    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k8...ry17-27-09.gif - NO IMG because I forgot to shrink frames. I know I messed up the Loop.
    Kinda NEw:

    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... Fail-1.gif
    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... inJump.gif
    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... eIntro.gif

    Year Old: I Was Better Then...

    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... r/rust.gif
    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... rust-1.gif
    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... edthis.gif
    http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k87/s ... atures.gif

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    I'd think you have gotten major rust, practically all your animations had too many stiffness,un-eased and most of all, bad physics. So I am highly suggesting your a low beginner.

    If you felt serious from your animations, go to the tutorial thread and almost every single tutorial including the popular/sticked ones will help completely.


    EDIT: sorry for the CC up there, your a Med beginner there.
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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    Time for CC AWwolf

    The..murdered one....not much to say about it, but one thing I saw that looked super awkward is that one of the letters went over the widescreen bar, that looks pretty weird, remember the widescreen bar is always in front of everything.
    The blood was pretty good on it, but really basic, but fine.

    I liked the flip..a lot, but I think you executed it kinda slow, but it was fine, the loop wasn't all that great but it was fine for me.

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    Med Begginer was what i was about expecting, and I can see how you rank it low. I've only returned for two days and hopefully the rust will wear off so i can improve.

    BTw i love the flip one too.

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    The Short animation was good,I thought that the flip was a little to late,try to let it flow.

    The Incomplete Animation,was DRAMATIC,it was good,I didn't see anything wrong with it.

    The last one,I thought was AMAZING,and I'm not trying to be a Suck-up.I liked A LOT!

    Keep Up The Good Work!

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    Pretty good, I believe that you mainly have the concept of easing, just put a little more "emphasis" on it, or make it more noticable. I saw some shakiness, you may want to go back through the frames and edit if you see any, and work on gravity, that easing will also help with it, I would say your probably about medium beginner. Keep it up!
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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    Update: Punch Loop


    I think it is a good loop, but i shouldv'e kept the punch there for one more frame. What do you think?

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    They're pretty good. I like the easing, and it's pretty smooth. But sometimes, you only move one joint per frame. Just move every joint in every frame, and it'll look good. Keep working on it :B I'd say about med-beginner.

    The Short-test animation:
    I don't really like how he just snapped the kick like that, but the easing was good.

    In the Dramatic animation, is that blood that came out of his head?

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    i think your high beg

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    Re: AWwolf's Thread

    Pretty good, but you need to work on shakyness. Be sure to follow through with the whole movement, not start a movement half way through easing. Also, your animations are sorta stiff. Be sure to move every joint in every frame. Some effects could also help you get a bit higher rank, try some beams or weather or water.
    Medium beginner.


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