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  1. #1
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    Test im i improved my self??

    Here You go!!

    Kick help me make it more powerfull
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    Punch same thing..
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  2. #2
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    Re: Test im i improved my self??

    Hello pivotdust, time for CC

    Your animations, they look good for the most part, but one major problem I see with them is foot placement.

    Foot placement is when you have your foot own the ground, and it stays still or doesn't go through the floor or slide around.

    On the kick, the movements seemed pretty jerky and un-eased but you can edit stuff like that, just spend more time on your animations. I see tons of potential.

    The punch, the left leg, it looked super awkward, edit that and it should look fine.

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  3. #3
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    Re: Test im i improved my self??

    if you want to make it look a lot more powerful, try adding tremors, whitch is when the punch or kick impacts or the punch/kick reaches the end, the ground shakes. not too much, though.

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    Re: Test im i improved my self??

    overall i think tremors are gay beyond belief they make the ground shake but the ground dosnt need to shake

    try heavy spacing
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    Re: Test im i improved my self??

    I see that you weren't that stiff, but you didn't ease, put them together like this
    no stiffness+easing=AWESOME

    plus on the punch, physics dude his foot was way up in the air

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    Re: Test im i improved my self??

    In the kicking one, you should have moved the middle joint in his stomach, it looked kind of stiff
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