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    ThunderHeads Pivots

    Ok so as u can probly guess im new to animating...
    Im reading tutorials and will try my hardest to get good at it.

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    Sword Trail
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    Awesome, but uh, nothing im just makin this post longer!!
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    For a first, that's great.

    Nice job Thunder, looked good, it was eased (sorta, lol), and the trails were decent. I'd suggest making the beginning and end a bit slower, that's about it. Great job, hope to see more soon.

    Keep it up,

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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    That was good. I think it would have been better if you put it in some kind of fighting context but hey thats just me. The only thing i have to say is only nitpicking. I wouldn't use i white sword with a black trail. It just kinda looks unnatural. Btw, did you make the trails or get them somewhere because i've been looking for some. I dont really think i can rank this based on just that alone though sorry. Courtesy?
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    That by itself is kinda hard to rank, it's good at that. keep practicing, that's good though for a beginner. It's to bad, I just signed up lol
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    Thnx guys. :THREAD UPDATE:
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    Alright.

    That wasn't that good. You have a basic understanding of how much to move the whole body while running, but you have to learn how to ease while running, and how to make it look smooth. A good example is this tutorial: http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=40454

    That's a good running tutorial for beginners.

    Hope it helps,

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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    hey the sword trail looks really cool. could have been eased more at the beginning. but as for the run, when you run your front foot doesnt move when its planted. the back leg crosses over and when that lands it becomes your front foot. causing it to stay planted. so dont make the front foot slide because it should stay plated. also. the foot went under the floor at one part. that shouldnt happen:P and work a bit on your stiffness. good job tho. keep up the animating. im looking forward to see more from you.
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    Re: ThunderHeads Pivots

    Thnx for the tutorial link Gabe. I made a new one following it. :Thread Update:
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