Shaolin monk test(comment and ile give courtsey :)

[illmatic]

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CC please.


oh, and creds to whoever made the shaolin monk :]

[Nezar]

overall i liked,
but the camera movement halfway was a phai,l try easing and moving the camera next time. Also the physics when he landed is off he lands to early imo some parts were stiff mostly the forearms
also the black flash when he kicks i think shouldn't be there
but i like the stk and movement was fluid and realistic

[illmatic]

thanks. Yeah, i was stuck with the arms, so i decided to leave it :/



more comments please.

[1337]

All right, here's a comment.

BTW, Cinderella made the stick.

The animation itself was great. The flash and kick were very great, showing force.

Movements

Overall, your movements were pretty good. The double framing and camera movements added to the animation's good side. The arms seemed to be correct, so I don't really see anything weird going on there. There might have been a problem, but that didn't really concern me.

Foot Placement

Now this is a small problem. There's nothing really with foot placement. The only flaw is that I see some frames in which the foot shook.

Shakiness

Shakiness is something you really don't want. Luckily, there wasn't much of that. In fact, I don't see any of that at all.

The Flipping
The flip wasn't too good. The launch was way too quick, and he spun insanely fast. The frame where he jumps shouldn't be so sudden. He should have sprung his feet, still on the ground, and then he jumps up. This is where easing should apply. He should have gone off the floor pretty quickly never-the-less, but you get what I mean. The flip should have been tucked in. He shouldn't have had his feet in that position, and get to where he was at the end that fast.

Other than that, that was great. The kick was perfect. The snap like movement really helped to the awesomeness. High beginner. It was great for a test.

Courtesy Returned

[illmatic]

Thanks

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