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  1. #1
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    MY ANIMATIONS ( Elites/ Veterans please reply )

    Animations are ordered newest to eldest
    Made in the last 2 days


    If your not a beginner, please reply and give me tips on how to improve.

    Pogo Test


    Kick|Punch


    Practice 2


    Practice


    Bmx Bunny-Hop


    Explosion Test



    Constructive Criticism please

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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS

    Hello! Welcome to DarkDemon.
    Well, your anims not so bad, but there is have some mistakes like: Some movements are not realistic, and your easing is bad. Have some shakiness.

    Curtz please. (I comment on your thread now you comment on mine, its in my signature)
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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS

    Welcome to DD... The Anis are nice, but try to use other bases/stickmen... I like the blood

    Curz?
    -War
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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS

    Thanks just starting pivot

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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS

    hey ur were better than me when i startyed lmao!
    [center:eld4a3e2]easing[/center:eld4a3e2]
    ok first u should try easing easing is like this

    as u can see its starts to increase, top speed, then slows.
    it brings us to a bike, you start peddeling your speeding up, then an old lady dashes out into the street u dont just stop like that, u slow down first then stop.
    [center:eld4a3e2]physics[/center:eld4a3e2]
    im pretty shure u know about physics right heres a example
    crap example i rushed
    as u see the ball increases speed bc of gravity, then hits the ground and gains speed going up slows down comes back down cuz of damn gravity and it bounce's more cuz its bouncy =P
    [center:eld4a3e2]stiffness[/center:eld4a3e2]
    i dont wanna animate examples anymore =(
    just make sure for stiffness to make every joint move every frame just the tiniests bit and it will look better.
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    so follow these and u will be good
    i say u r about med-low beginer
    courtzey?
    thats where u click the lil thing that says playa's in my sig, and comment and rate my thread.
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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS

    nice animations, the blood was weird but other then that, they were good

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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS ( Elites/ Veterans please reply )

    Okay thankz but could i get some ppl who are not in the beginner category to reply... please and thank-you.

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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS ( Elites/ Veterans please reply )

    accept comments from all, not jsut people from above beginner. there are a lot of beginners who are a lot better then you who can give you a good comment a lot more worthwhile then people above beginners.
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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS ( Elites/ Veterans please reply )

    Quote Originally Posted by Kiwi Beach
    there are a lot of beginners who are a lot better then you who can give you a good comment a lot more worthwhile then people above beginners.
    Like me.

    Your animations are generally pretty stiff, and have bad movement spacing. Movements spacing is just another way to say 'easing', but it is a wider topic. For example, easing is only how you accelerate into a movement, and deccelerate out of it. Movement spacing is how much you move the body parts in between the easing.
    When making certain movements, you must think about how they are done in real life, and move them according to the actual speed and direction that they go in real life in order to make them look realistic. Another problem is that you keep using the default; this makes the back stiff, and makes your animations look worse, unless you REALLY know how to animate with that particular figure; most animators don't. A helpful tip is that you shouldn't try to do many effects until you get some basic movements down. To do this, you should do a few tests, trying to get the spacing and movements right for a walk, run, jump, punch, etc. Once you get this down, your animating ideas can be more open for experimentation.

    Low Begginer

    Good luck on improving, mate, and welcome to Darkdemon.

    -BP

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    Re: MY ANIMATIONS ( Elites/ Veterans please reply )

    that's not bad! it's a little stiff and needs easing but otherwise good for beginner.
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