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    Blue Phoenix: .Trace PW

    Well, I was uncomfortable trying to keep animating at the Intermediate level, and I really want to improve with animating; as I want to have a career involving animation.

    So I'm starting over.

    Newest Animation:

    [img]http://**********.com/img/1252774195.gif[/img]

    Other Animations

    Beatdown-Practicing hand to hand combat.

    wereZ Joint- A little bit of parkour.

    Picto Tribute- I actually really like this.

    Spike Punch- Smooth and simple.

    Beam Fail- Yeah.

    Boost- Turning off a light. Guest appearance by Veng.

    Combo- Enhanced version of below animation.

    Practice- Flood helped me out on this.

    Jointable

    Wu v. Darkbert- Piv.

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    Re: [BP]

    I like it dude. But I don`t like hand moves in your newest anim. High beg border Interz yeah? (I comment on your thread now you comment on mine, its in my signature)
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    Re: [BP]

    gtfo beginners.
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    Re: [BP]

    Well bro, you have two problems here:

    For one, you're really stiff. Your back, your legs, your arms...

    Second, your movements have barely any power and it kind of looks like a feather landing on the ground, and them OMFGWTFFUCKINGHUGETREMOR. You have to make your movements a bit more fast-paced, and you'll look like you have a lot more power.

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    Re: [BP]

    ha, gratz to get moved down
    i really don't have anything worthy to say, but i can try.
    the arms were really awkward, and also a taddy stiff and quite shaky, but all the rest seemed fine to me, but your physic is too exagerated

    fix that and inter?
    make longer anims too

    i dunno what rank shit

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    Re: [BP]

    Oh hey bro.

    Well, your newest was too slow, didnt show much power.=/force. Also, a thing that some people forget; variate your spacing appropriately. If he is punching, make him increase speed, just as in your newest; the spacing was pretty much the same most of the way through. The arms on the run could've bent more, and swung more, and it would've probably looked better if you had increased the speed of the run and punch. Also, the tremor was pretty weak. Well, tl;dr: VAriate our spacing appropriately more, and show more force, momentum etc.

    Congratulations on beginner, you've deserved it for some time now.

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    Re: [BP]

    WTf was up with that run yo.
    It was totally stiff.
    And that psike was perty bad too.
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    Re: [BP]

    Your latest was good but speed it up and make your limbs move more your guy seems to tense make him looser very nice idea though courtesy please

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    Re: [BP]

    Update; Picto Tribute preview..

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    Re: Blue Phoenix: Picto Tribute. Kinda.

    wow lol u made like a beginer version of it lmao!
    ok i sometimes see a lil stiffness and such.
    i see u r good at easing.
    and smoothness is good.
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