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    Ashtar's Anims | High Beginner - August 20

    [center:25ubfn2h][img]http://**********.com/img/1250711882.png[/img]
    Current Rank: High Beginner[/center:25ubfn2h]

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    Well I got the green light from Sharpy that I can make a new thread (If you don't believe me PM me). I got back into animating because I can't quit without making it into intermediate yet huh? I was originally High Beg but then I quit because I didn't have any ideas. So here we go.

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    [center:25ubfn2h]Newest Animation:

    Kickloop
    Creds: Darren for the base.
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    Other Animations

    Jump!
    http://pivotup.com/files/1n8u5txr.gif
    Creds: Darren, again

    Runloop V1
    http://pivotup.com/files/4shq8inc.gif
    Creds: Darren

    Combo
    http://pivotup.com/files/mxuh3fdl.gif
    Creds: None

    Walk
    http://pivotup.com/files/vrxjp6f0.gif
    Creds: My friend for the stick. But Idk who's it was originally.

    Run V2 (With another guy added)
    http://pivotup.com/files/b0jk13s6.gif
    Creds: None

    Just tell me what rank I am atm and CC if you can. I give Courtz too. Only if the comment is good.
    [center:36g9kik7]My master = Raf
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    Re: Ashtar's Anims | Back into animating - August 19

    Hey Brendan.

    Alright, you're good, your featured is your best, smooth, not stiff, I'd say high beginner. Overall, med-high beginner, your main problem, like in the combo, is stiffness, bend the leg more, and you'll be fine, keep it up, not bad.

    Good luck,

    Gabe

    Curts?
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    Re: Ashtar's Anims | Back into animating - August 19

    Quote Originally Posted by .Gabe
    Hey Brendan.

    Alright, you're good, your featured is your best, smooth, not stiff, I'd say high beginner. Overall, med-high beginner, your main problem, like in the combo, is stiffness, bend the leg more, and you'll be fine, keep it up, not bad.

    Good luck,

    Gabe

    Curts?
    Lol.

    Sorry, I just had to say it.
    I really like the combo. It was eased but like .Gabe said, you could've bend the leg more.
    High beginner.

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    Re: Ashtar's Anims | Back into animating - August 19

    T'was a older animation. I was just making an example for a friend but then kept going on for some reason and liked it. Lewl if you had a thread I'd give you courtesy...
    [center:36g9kik7]My master = Raf
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    Re: Ashtar's Anims | Back into animating - August 19

    lol
    your anims are waay too simple, make them less boring, with more detailations and shit
    make them longer, and fix your easing!
    heavyspacing i mean
    it's kinda bad.
    sorry for un cc i can't rank you, too boring anims
    Med begz

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    Re: Ashtar's Anims | Back into animating - August 19

    Nice animations Ashtar, your latest one had a bit of choppiness, not bad easing, and some stiffness involved,your others one seemed to be fabulous with good movements and other thingies, just need a longer animation.
    Med-High beginner
    (Sorry I couldn't give you any CC).
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