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  1. #1
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    My new Pivots :3

    Its a run[attachment=1:lzcu0302]Run DD.gif[/attachment:lzcu0302]
    my punch[attachment=0:lzcu0302]Punch DD.gif[/attachment:lzcu0302]

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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    Your Animations are good but rlly shakey

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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    Quote Originally Posted by DaPivotX
    Your Animations are good but rlly shakey
    I agree.

    not a two word post...AHA!
    lol. :3
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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    Um.. I'm thinking pretty basic things.
    Foot placement In your punch animation was a somewhat off, when he punched he kinda slid foward.
    I did like the run animation though, just a few things to work on though like easing and shakiness.
    Not all to sure how the ranking system works but Im thinking low-med beginner or med-high beginner.
    Look at a couple of tutorials, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.
    Happy animating.

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    Re: My new Pivots :3 UPDATE

    [attachment=1:3qlzapj5]naruto sasuke vs naruto.gif[/attachment:3qlzapj5] :# loook
    [attachment=0:3qlzapj5]soul prewue.gif[/attachment:3qlzapj5] a preveuw <-- sorry for english

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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    Yea your getting better, you need to work on your walking, a little more on your foot placement and do some more easing,It will get you to high beginner.
    Right now, I think you are atleast med beginner, try working on somthing big.
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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    WHOA! The background in that animation is really cool!

    Make sure that your feet stay in the same place and don't wiggle about. Look at someone walking in real life. You notice they lift one foot and move it infront of them. BIG WHOOP. But, the other foot remains planted firmly to ensure that they don't fall on their ass and make everyone laugh at them. (You know its hilarious!) Try to do this in your animations.

    The Naruto animation: Awesome stickfigs, and nice easing!

    Overall NICE WORK! KEEP IT UP!

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    Re: My new Pivots :3 test

    [attachment=0:teolcm6c]test.gif[/attachment:teolcm6c] ok here it is barrious
    i think thats your name

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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    you definately need to work on foot placement. make a small, foot-sized stick and put it on the ground. just keep the stick figure's foot lined up with it until the foot is lifted off the ground.

    make sense?
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    Re: My new Pivots :3

    The Good:
    Complex animations for beginners, good for practice and experience in pivot!

    Could use work:
    Quite shaky and choppy.

    Suggestion:
    Read tutorials (Baha's tut recommended) (56k Warning!) and practice!


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