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    Basic Fight

    well,Ok this is my first one here so take it easy on me,leave me some comments on improvement without screaming on my face cause im a newbie and hope ya enjoy the EPIC FAIL

    ehehehe perhaps its too choppy i guess(for what ive seen this is really choppy)

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    Re: Basic Fight

    how you say its very choopy
    you dont ease in your animation
    ease is like this l=frame -=movements
    ll-l--l---l----l-----l----l---l--l-ll
    your ease
    -lll--l-ll---lll-l

    stifnness is when you dont move every joint in every frame

    for now low beg
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    Re: Basic Fight

    humph. well its very choppy, even for your first one maybe try reading baha's tutorial, in the Pivot Tutorial forum, that'll help you loads. Anyway, for your first few, maybe make some easing tests, or some simple single stick movements, you'll soar through the ranks!

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    Re: Basic Fight

    Due to people saying i should post my new creation here,might as well do

    enjoy!

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    Re: Basic Fight

    this is not that good
    you must work on easing
    when you ease then animation will be smoother
    i see shakyness in your animation that is when you suddenly move joint in other direction
    look baha tut it will help you much
    for now just keep practicing
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    Re: Basic Fight

    Wow dead lord, don't you look at the bright side of animations? I mean your not just going to go to the elite zone(or any place else) and look at a animation and comment,
    "this is not that good" are you? (if you are, i'd like to see what might happen)
    You know your animations are not all that better, everyone has a few mistakes in
    animating (I will not say them for the sake of your privacy and this comment) but it wouldn't stop people from going to your thread and looking for them selves.
    So play nice with the other animators.

    Ok Reconravage, your animations could do with some adjustments. Everyone else caught all the other tips, except foot placement.
    In your new animation, when the figure ran into his postion and started his first punch,
    his foot slid forwards, under the line and then backwards. And at the end when he did a upercut, he really didn't leave the ground,did he?
    Insted he went under the line (ground) and popped back up.
    Just keep in mind those tips and like dead lord said, keep practicing.

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    Re: Basic Fight

    Mmm..Got to reading and well performing baha`s tutorial,now i would like to present my newer thing.Take a look:


    Give me ratings not hates,like

    1.)You suck
    2.)Needs improvement
    3.)Its ok
    4.)Good
    5.)OMFGZ you rock for a newb!

    Haha well thats for you guys to decide on how i`m doing oh and the entire animation,I didn`t move the figure too much =D its a visual trick!

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    Re: Basic Fight

    Its pretty stiff. I would suggest you move and ease the joints more each frame to lessen the ''robotic'' look. Low Beginner, but you'll improve.

    Comment on my animations?

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    Re: Basic Fight

    Lol well duh everyone that animates knows its a Visual Trick and Almost alot of animators use it

    Its called Center origin

    anyway You are getting better i saw some sorts of trying to ease but its still very stiff... and the foot placement is way off... Might i suggest lookin at others threads to see how good they are? and see what you need to do to gget that good....

    Over all low Beginner but you are improving

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