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    Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    [center:1jk04oey]Q's thread.[/center:1jk04oey]

    Well, this is my thread.

    [center:1jk04oey]Iz newest animation.[/center:1jk04oey]
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    [center:1jk04oey]Don't ask me why the cannon's lid opens at the beggning, 'cuz I rly dun know.[/center:1jk04oey]
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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    As you can see, I have just made my thread. Please leave a comment after the "BEEP." WAIT FOR IT, WAIT FOR IT, NOW! *BEEP*

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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    One thing. When you see people don't comment within the first 5 mintues of your topic being posted, don't freak out, hah.

    Anyways, not bad too start with, the legs cannot bend that far back, also, it was a bad reaction, the head should've flown back a little, pushing the whole body back. The cannon should've not been ease that much as well, but medium beginner.
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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    Med Beg- The beginning was eased. The man shouldn't have a harder reaction. The speed the ball was traveling he should have fell harder. Work on stiffness also when the man fell it was stiff. The ball fly was pretty good. As was the cannon fire.

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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    Not bad. Your roughly high begginner but take all the crap off your lacation tag. It's compressing the whole post to the right. Work on your timing. you seem to have easing down and speed is pretty good.

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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    I'd say med beginner, work on on easing a little more.

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    Re: Wuz up? I'm new and my first animation is posted.

    Hmm... There are ok movements and easing and all that, but I don't really like the way you animated that. It was too stop-and-go, with a bunch of pointless pauses in the animation. It's like heavyspacing, sorta, but with too much easing. Med Beginner
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