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    Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    please help on improving. :3
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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    Uhh..Wheres the animation?

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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    That was actually pretty good for a starter, I see tons of potential here, Some things I would work on thoguh..

    The figure was really stiff, but the pose was cool, I'm glad to got the gun holding right, most beginners just throw a gun up there and call it a day. Try moving your figure a lot more every frame, like the legs and such. Also work on easing a bit, this is when..well...when you move the joints like this...|-|-|--|------|----|--|-|-| Like that, it will make the animation look way smoother.

    Right now I say low beginner, you have lots of potentail

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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    thanks so...
    try not to keep still in any frame (if possible)
    and some more easing?
    thanks for the mark on the potential stuff
    really spirit lifting
    THANKS!
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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    Everyone loves some humor in a animation
    I recommend thinking about gravity when making an animation. Your stick figure kind of hovered in mid air for a bit while he choked the guy with the gun.
    This is really good man. Start making more animations!
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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    Yeah, I would love to see more from you also.

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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    Lol, I liked that.... the murderer wasn't done until he threw away the cigarette. You do need to work on stiffness though. Also try to add in the laws of physics, nothing can hover, lol. Other than that it was awesome, and the idea was great.
    Shit, I run my own style you run yours, so shut up and animate!
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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    damn thats amazing for your first!

    id say low begginer still, its choppy, uneased and bad physics or w/e.. lol but i think your close to med beg already

    keep it up
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    Re: Please tell me what i can aprove on I am new

    Wow nice first, He hovered for a second remember Physics. But so far so good, I want to see more from you.


 
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