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    My updates - Begginer stuff

    Heres some animations im making

    Please only comment the animations and the rank if you know it.
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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Ello!

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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Update
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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    You have the motions down good, but you need a bit more. On your top animation, the kick could have used a few more frames at the end to kind of finish it. You know, like have him step back again or put his foot down. On the second one, the kick to the blue guy was slow. It had a good motion, but it needed more "snap" if you get what I mean.

    Overall youre medium beginner id say.

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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    well.... work on your kick when you kick kinda umm ease when you get to the end and dont make your movements too big
    ummm i will say low-med begginer





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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Your two animations seem nice... but they also seem unfinished.

    Your foot placement is great and your even easing. (most newbies have problems with this)

    All and all, just make a longer animation!

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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Quote Originally Posted by Frenzibrenzi
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    Anyways you ease I see, but you over ease. Many people do this. So just space more between easing and you'll be fine.
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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Quote Originally Posted by Demoncruiser
    Thanks, i no it was short i just made some stuff


    Your stuff is pretty good, i think your around med begginer to.. not officialy sure since i only seen one of your animations and it was with a default :P


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    Um, next time can you look at all my animations or at least my most recent one?
    I only used the default in one of my original animations where I was making FUN OF such animations. it was a joke...
    I'm using a tri-back stick that I made myself...
    And that I don't believe this is courtesy: all you said was (paraphrased) pretty good --- med beginner --- only seen one
    Can you give me any criticism please?
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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    Update: Better animation.
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    Re: My updates - Begginer stuff

    The part right after the transformtion was a bit choppy...
    but then the part after is nicely smoothed and eased...
    Just try and work on getting rid of choppyness
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