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    am i interz yet, or even close?

    this is my inter attempt



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    lol my avatar sucks
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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    ARGH, Stop making new threads whenever you post an animation, just make one thread, and update it by posting in that thread

    Anyways, onto the animation!

    I thought it was kinda choppy, maybe your saving it wrong, it looked about med beginner to me though. It was pretty good though, I liked it

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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?


    Please work on easing:
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1256423954.gif[/img]
    (I blurred the movement so that you can see where the ball previously was in the previous frame.
    As you can see, easing = a change in spacing between frames.
    The spacing between frames gets farther and farther when accelerating.
    normal spacing is like this:
    |-|--|---|-----|----------|-----|---|--|-|
    Here is a slow motion example of the image above:
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1256424220.gif[/img]
    Hopefully, the easing is obvious in this slow-mo example.

    And never call an animation an "inter attempt"... its like killing the animation before we even see it.

    Ranky: Low beginner, keep working!

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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    i am doing easing, its just im focusi ng on physics and creativity

    so dont show me that
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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    If you're doing easing you are doing really crappy easing, no offense...
    I think it is way too choppy and in my opinion, easing can fix some of this choppyness!
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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    You're not even close to intermediate.

    - It was stiff as a shitstorm.
    - The physics weren't that great either.
    - The reaction sucked.
    - The momentum was off, so was the footplacement.

    Sorry, low-beginner. Sorry for being harsh btw.
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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    Quote Originally Posted by pivotdomination
    i am doing easing, its just im focusi ng on physics and creativity

    so dont show me that
    Stop being in denial, just accept their criticism (excluding Lewl's, which was pretty harsh). Criticism really helps people improve.
    They are right though, your animation lacked easing and physics.

    Some parts did lack easing; when he was hopping on to the rope, his arms moved too quickly.
    When the floor appeared, it didn't slow down as it moved in. It just suddenly stopped.
    That's also the same with when he landed on the floor.
    After he leaped off the rope, he didn't rotate even a little bit.
    His back stayed in the same position the whole time.
    What Barium said does is actually useful. It wouldn't be a good idea to turn that advice down.

    Going back to physics, there wasn't a lot of that.
    When the stickfigure came out of nowhere and landed on the line, his legs didn't bend enough.
    It looked like he put no effort into the jump, making it look like there wasn't any gravity.
    Also, his arms were in an awkward position during that process.
    He didn't bounce when he hit the floor, too.
    These examples prove that there's no physics.

    To be honest, it's not anywhere near intermediate.
    But that's okay. Just keep trying your hardest. You will get there at some point.

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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    well its just that people say i dont even know what it is, and i do!!!!!



    this is my blood test leave comment only if it isnt harsh



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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    ty for gay comment lewl you gaytard
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    Re: am i interz yet, or even close?

    movments were exetremly shaky and choppy. The blood actually looks half decent, but there was no reactions whatsoever.


    And lewl isnt a gaytard. You are, and read the rules. dont double post and keep your animations in one thread.
    Old fag!


 
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