Hello and welcome to our community! Is this your first visit?
Register
Results 1 to 7 of 7
  1. #1
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Somewhere in Europe...
    Posts
    16

    This Is Sparta!!!

    Hi!

    I am new here,but i animate for 3 weeks in pivot and 1 year in flash but mim not very good...

    i accept any collab invitation
    RockīnīRoll

    This is my invisible thread!

    COURTESY?

    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=69459

  2. #2
    Fanatic Enthusiast

    Join Date
    Apr 2009
    Posts
    3,870

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    Hey, welcome to DarkDemon.org, that animation was funny, but had flaws.
    Stiffness
    The famous Shtiffness, to remove this bitch, simply move all joints per frame, it will make your anims 100% better.

    Easing
    Well, yours was uneased, try making movements like acceleration and deaceleration, it will make your anims looks eased (duhh) and smoother.

    Smoothness
    Lacked this one too, if you trail the onionskin correctly, you'll get that, well, you'll also get some flow.

    Low beginner

    Courtesy? (means ---> reply to my thread, click "pivot" in my signature.)
    [center:3i8o92ef]Old thread[/center:3i8o92ef]

  3. #3
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Jan 2009
    Posts
    378

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by .SLide
    Hey, welcome to DarkDemon.org, that animation was funny, but had flaws.
    Stiffness
    The famous Shtiffness, to remove this bitch, simply move all joints per frame, it will make your anims 100% better.

    Easing
    Well, yours was uneased, try making movements like acceleration and deaceleration, it will make your anims looks eased (duhh) and smoother.

    Smoothness
    Lacked this one too, if you trail the onionskin correctly, you'll get that, well, you'll also get some flow.

    Low beginner

    Courtesy? (means ---> reply to my thread, click "pivot" in my signature.)
    Kind of ussless to ask Courtesy to a new one.

  4. #4
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Somewhere in Europe...
    Posts
    16

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    thanks for the tips. i will try to work on that
    RockīnīRoll

    This is my invisible thread!

    COURTESY?

    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=69459

  5. #5
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Location
    Chuck Norris
    Posts
    60

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    your effects (such as the smoke and slow-mo) are oretty good, but like I've said many times, watch your animations over and over, dsicover what looks crap about them and fix it. Such as the stiffness, try to imagine what is going to happen when you do something, that's how you learn to ease, just do a few tests and work on your pivots more, welcome to the forums.

    ^My thread^. Courtesy is appreciated and returned
    [img]http://**********.com/img/1257630842.png[/img]

  6. #6
    Newbie
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Somewhere in Europe...
    Posts
    16

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f...05268#p1205268
    my new anime!
    click link to watch
    RockīnīRoll

    This is my invisible thread!

    COURTESY?

    http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=69459

  7. #7
    LOS
    LOS is offline
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Posts
    63

    Re: This Is Sparta!!!

    Hmm... You hardly nearly correctly use effects, for example when there was a dust - it should appear hardly more to the left but as there was an inscription of "LoL" to me it was pleasant, physics of a ball not that, cargo when was at the earth has deviated more to the left is too a minus... In general it learn and to turn out at you.

    Courtz?


 

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •