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  1. #1
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    Cool intense fight

    this is my second fight evorz. Its pretty cool though i like it.

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    Yea i like it to still not inter but ur getting there and this is your 1st post llol
    o and just saying its 1 post for ALL your anis

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    pretty good, but the blood at the end was overdone and some of the movements looked out, but it was good.

    -SX

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    Welcome to DarkDemon Forums. That animation was very good over all if it really is only your second fight. I recommend increasing the frame rate- it will really add to the smoothness and quality of the animation.

    Good Things
    1. Movements- they mostly looked realistic, except a few (which I'll get to later.)
    2. Blood- when it wasn't overdone.


    Mediocre Things
    1. Punches- they looked held back: take a look at the black figure's third punch (count them.) He should relly extend his entire arm and maybe throw his weight forward a little.
    2. Screen flashes- they didn't work with this style of animating and became distracting. If you were doing an animation with lots of effects, flashes might be acceptable.
    3. Walking- the step were inconsistant and off. Walking is the toughest skill for an animator to perfect, so don't worry about that too much.


    Bad Things
    1. The green figure's stiffness when he was thrown by the black figure, and when he spun around to kick the black figure. He should have bent more for the first, and moved his head up more for the second.


    Not a bad animation, but definitely beginner level at this point. Keep working on the things I pointed out, and you'll advance quickly.

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    thanks for the criticism guys. Anyone else?

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    Not for a beginner _ man that pharse is used so much, But I think you will benfit from taking some time to work on smoothness and movement I noticed it was alittle off, either way good effort.

    - Adam

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    i liked it it was cool yeah, edit your post and post ALL your anims one here )

    NOOOOO I HATE THIS THING


 

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