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    Anim with Doddsy

    [center:w2e4kzeu]Welcome to mah thread
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    NEW RUN


    NEW WALK


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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    nice walking. but i sugjest moving the arms a little more. like when the arm in front comes goes down, the second joint on the arm moves forward.
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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    Quote Originally Posted by perdinskee
    nice walking. but i sugjest moving the arms a little more. like when the arm in front comes goes down, the second joint on the arm moves forward.
    More?... Not really. Legs and arms do not move that much in a walk, infact, they barely come apart. Just try to ease it more to make it a little smoother.
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    Re: Mah Thread :)

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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    New RUN
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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    It looks good, but, unless my eyes are messing up, I never really see the arms or legs cross.

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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    I have to fix the arms they are not crossing xD
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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    well it was good but i saw some flaws on the running and walking
    the running
    there was some shakiness and off placement in some frames
    the walk
    the legs just snapped down which is very unrealistic and the arms didn't have enough flow
    fix this and you will have a great run/walk loop(s)

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    Re: Mah Thread :)

    FLIP

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    Re: *UPDATE* FLIP,COMMENT PLZ

    Haysz! That's pretty cool. That Flip animation was eased, had good spacing and decent camera movement.

    There were a few flaws. One was when he landed on that Asian roof. When he jumped down onto the roof, he should have had gain momentum so the man should have leaned forward a bit more. If you jump like that onto a roof or something wouldn't you lean forward? Coz you gotta think of gravity pulling the weight down.

    Okaysz, the man lands and jumps off the roof into mid-air. That's good but something i think would make that part look better.When the man does a somersault in mid-air, i think his knees could have been closer to his chest.

    Then man does a somersault in the air and then drops down. For that part i think as the man drops down, he could have been straightened up towards the end.

    I still think that jump is pretty cool. Something i would like to suggest. When the man jumps down, off and drops, maybe add trails to it? that would make it look nice.


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