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Thread: TSM's Thread

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    TSM's Thread

    I'm making a new profile, because something happened with this one, so I hope I don't get reported for double posting or something like that.
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

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    Hey Sir Clanhost... xD


    Starting with the animation on the top:
    Itīs overally a good animation with good movements but some things are ugly..
    It laggs a bit.. see what i mean?? Especially the head is lagging!! *Headbanging* xP
    And the foot placement is ugly.. Please always before you do the next frame, fix the feet...
    I like how the hands are animated and i canīt see stiffness^^

    Now the combo:

    Itīs okay, but i see a lot of stiffness, and i miss the Easing!!
    Thatīs your Kick(In frames): I-I-I-I-I-I-I
    With Easing: II--I----I----I--II
    Please try to ease.. With easing your animation looks 10 times better, really!!
    And again look at foot placement, itīs also important!!

    Run to stop:
    The run looks completely weird, stupid weird!! xP
    Watch run tutorials or study the runs others!!
    The head is banging again.. lol
    And the change-over between run and stop is too short..
    He stops too fast.. you could watch videos of sportrunners and study their movements, if you want^^
    So you were able to imagine the cange-over better^^
    Here no foot placement problems, because the stick is centered, but again try to ease..

    Puh, that was a long comment.. xD
    So you have to study at foot placement, easing, stiffness and smoothness...
    In my oppinion you are a Med Beginner!! Keep it up^^



    A little courtesy??

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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by USMC Alpha 4 1
    First Comment

    Hey Sir Clanhost... xD


    Starting with the animation on the top:
    Itīs overally a good animation with good movements but some things are ugly..
    It laggs a bit.. see what i mean?? Especially the head is lagging!! *Headbanging* xP
    And the foot placement is ugly.. Please always before you do the next frame, fix the feet...
    I like how the hands are animated and i canīt see stiffness^^

    Now the combo:

    Itīs okay, but i see a lot of stiffness, and i miss the Easing!!
    Thatīs your Kick(In frames): I-I-I-I-I-I-I
    With Easing: II--I----I----I--II
    Please try to ease.. With easing your animation looks 10 times better, really!!
    And again look at foot placement, itīs also important!!

    Run to stop:
    The run looks completely weird, stupid weird!! xP
    Watch run tutorials or study the runs others!!
    The head is banging again.. lol
    And the change-over between run and stop is too short..
    He stops too fast.. you could watch videos of sportrunners and study their movements, if you want^^
    So you were able to imagine the cange-over better^^
    Here no foot placement problems, because the stick is centered, but again try to ease..

    Puh, that was a long comment.. xD
    So you have to study at foot placement, easing, stiffness and smoothness...
    In my oppinion you are a Med Beginner!! Keep it up^^



    A little courtesy??
    Lol, i don't care how long it is. but thanks, ill work on it.
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    okay^^
    I think that was my longest comment ever... xP

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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    .........
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    No comments.....
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    Added new animation
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    You're getting better!
    Best animation: Short Fall (In my opinion)
    It is a little bit fidgity, and the fet slide a little. other than that it looks pretty good.

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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    practice my friend

    your only problem to me seems like stiffness, and shakiness.
    Alittle easing here and there

    The Holy Orders Fall tribute was nice but the foot placement was sliding and the shakyness was bad
    The Jump or Super Jump was also nice but too plain and basic.

    My advice just study animations and practice animations and with what you have learned make something of your own
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    Re: TheStickMaster777's Thread

    As Exhaust said "practice my friend ".
    Now IMO, your kick test did'nt show power when extending as it is not fully
    extended, it sorta hovered on the last frames too.
    EDIT: oh and the arms reaction was very bad.
    The jump did'nt have good physics or easing.
    it was sort stiff while he was gliding out of the page
    and im sorta sick of writing anymore so yeah
    EDIT: Med Beg.

    COURTESY PLEASE?
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