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  1. #1
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    [Regenoration] Thread

    [center:2pzilbh2]About my thread
    Started: 12/4/10 @ 5:01PM South Australian time

    Beginner: 23/5/09

    Animation Rank: Rank me
    Pivot i use: I use pivot 3 modded by dd or pivot 2.2.5
    Creds:
    YongWalRang
    MainFrame
    Inspirations:
    YongWalRang
    MainFrame
    Bolt
    Power
    Endless


    Request: can someone please make me a sig stick with spikey hair and shorts with a open head and any detail u like ?
    Favorite animation



    -Newest Animation-

    This is a poor animation as this is my first animation like this

    -Animations-
    Run
    Wave[/center:2pzilbh2]

  2. #2
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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    hey dude thats pretty good

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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    thanks man i have alot to improve on tho

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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    Haha you got some pretty cool stuff man. Your doing good for a beginner. I'll give you some CC on how to improve, so you can become a better animator.

    First of all, the running was nice. it had some pretty nice movements and spacing. To improve it though, this is what you should do. First of all, you should move the ground stick next time, it is staying still which makes the stickman look like his going nowhere. Secondly, the back was very stiff, move it around more next time. The origin should move up and down more also. The legs looked good, but it looked like it had one awkward frame of easing in there, if you remove that frame than it would look more fluent and less stop-n-go-ish.

    The skating animation was pretty good too, when he goes down though, instead of turning the legs backwards, make them bent like it would in real life, the body and arms would also be bent instead of standing vertical. He would also go a lot faster in real life, start him easing down, than space the frames further as it gets along.

    Anyway you're doing really nicely though, just trying to give you some tips. Keep it up.

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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    Edited the run made the ground move hope it looks better

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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    Yep that looks better Now edit the back to make it less stiff.

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    Re: [Regenoration] Thread

    thanks man


 

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