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  1. #1
    Regular Member MonoMial's Avatar
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    Monothread - Rust Disposal Expert

    "Welcome" Lettering
    Oh! Are you here? Please write ONE comment, just ONE, ONE comment is enough for me.
    Note: I'm worsening from before!


    I am working on
    [spoiler:27d85lx5]Big Tutorial on Understick.org (I am professionel on Understick.org,)[/spoiler:27d85lx5]

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    I'm the rust disposal expert

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    [center:27d85lx5]I'm Bored
    I'm soooo bored. This animation is its evidence
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    Kick Master (Sanji Tribute)
    There is an action that's unlogical, i make it only for a good view.
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    Very Speedy Fight
    I try to make a DBZ animation (don't with the DBZ figures )
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    My Comeback Animation
    I've broken pivot but now, this is my comeback animation.
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    Fake!!!
    Eh! I'm bored.
    Imageshack
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    US Animation Contest
    I make this animation for big animation contest of Understick.org.
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    W.C Combo
    I make this animation for fun Credits to Jon.
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    TRGG Base Movements
    Thank you very much TRGG! Your base is awesome!
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    Blood
    I make this for working on blood effect.
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    Shaolin Moves
    What do you want
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    Effects Test
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    Short Movements
    This is just a little test.
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    Fast Combo
    I make this for USC1
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    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Re: My "new" Title

    Ohh they are some pretty nice loops. It's nice to see your moving each joint in each frame.

    The run trial: Well this one was pretty good, nice to see you moving each joint ;D! But you overdid it, I will get to that point later. Well anyway, the main vital problem in it was that the origin didn't move ( or if it did, it's not very noticable). Always move the origin a decent amount to see his ascending and descending in each step. The legs looked pretty much spot on to me, so good work there . The arms did have a problem though, main was the fact that they looked stiff. Try to loosen them up more, move the forearm limbs more to make it more fluent. Another problem I found with them, was that the front arm moved unrealistically. The front arm should bend whilst going upwards, and straighten out whilst going downwards.
    The final flaw I found was that the back moved way too much, which made it look goofy. The back does need to be moved, but only a tiny bit so it's not overdone.
    Anyway overall, it was a nice loop with some small flaws. Keep it up!

    The walk trial: Well that was pretty nice. The back and head moved realistically and wasn't stiff, so nice job there. The main vital flaw I found in it, was the arms and legs. They don't look like they crossed, always make sure that they have the right spacing in each frame to look like they cross over each other. The feet also wobble on the ground. But anyway it was nice and smooth, just fix the problems with the legs mainly.

    Keep it up! And good luck improving.

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    Re: My "new" Title

    Thanks!
    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Re: My "new" Title

    Another Comments?
    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Re: My "new" Title

    I think they made awesome loops
    Splinter cell Conviction FTW!!!

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    Re: My Thread (PLEASE LOOK!!!)

    Thank you
    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Re: My Thread (PLEASE LOOK!!!)

    need to work on foot placement but other than that there gd
    Courtesy
    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=76001

    Don't get it twisted!!
    Click here to see the first two ep's
    http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=61&t=72478
    Click it... I know u want to.
    http://www.youtube.com/user/Sniperthe0ne

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    Regular Member MonoMial's Avatar
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    Re: My Thread (PLEASE LOOK!!!)

    Come on!!!
    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Regular Member MonoMial's Avatar
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    Re: My Thread (PLEASE LOOK!!!)

    Added animations. What's My Rank?!
    Sorry for my bad English.
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    Re: My Thread (PLEASE LOOK!!!)

    Ha! I knew you didn't quit and neither did I you just quit youtube right? Anyways your pretty good now.

    Courtesy?


 
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