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  1. #1
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    some of my stuff.

    I've heard you guys are strict,
    anyway
    here is, well, some of my stuff.
    in order of newestness


    Updated.
    NEWEST
    Slash test.




    DBZ effects test

    feel the power.
    heres the .piv, cause the gif screwed with it >.<
    http://pivotup.com/files/tklmgswi.piv

    Throw fight




    spinning flip kick of awesomeness
    http://pivotup.com/files/x1s7odcy.gif











    lightsaber test
    http://pivotup.com/files/lp1u34ki.gif









    some of my earlier, more crappy stuff
    just fer laughs

    claw test
    http://pivotup.com/files/652yrpmn.gif


    http://pivotup.com/files/652yrpmn.gif

    rank away.

    not my old stuff obviously.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Wow! I will be fair with you, your animations are really good for a starting.
    The 'spinning flip kick' was alright, there were very nice positions (they can obviously be improved) and not a lot of jerks (or shakes), for a starting. The second animation seemed nice too, but I think it was too speed. Try to turn down the FPS (frames per second). I found something weird on that one too. At the beginning of the animation, the stickman is on the 'half' on the ground (don't know how to call it sorry, I'm not an english teenager lol) and after flips, he's ON the ground! It's weird because at the beginning, we thought it was just the horizon. Just after flips, it's not the horizon anymore, but altogether a fulcrum! Do you understand what I mean? I'm maybe not very clear in my explanations. Otherwise, the lightning on the sword was nice I think (too speed to be completly sure!)
    I recommend you to take a look of Baha's tutorial, it's very nice for beginners who are starting pivot (or not). To go there, Pivot animation->Pivot Tutorials->Baha's Tut (one of the sticked tuts)
    Good luck!
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    thanks, yeah I noticed the thing with the footing after I had about 30 frames of him standing on the horizon, so It would take too long to edit it out, and Its not that great anyway.
    mostly I was testing the blur effects of the lightsaber, which took a lot of sticks to pull off.
    anyway thanks for replying.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Guess what...
    UPDATE!!!!

    random ninjas.. random sword...
    well, whatever.


    just totally random.
    not my best, fortunately.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Yay, another update, not like anyone cares...
    I made a big long anim, for me at least.

    I know its very stiff, but Its one of my continuing an older one projects.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Ok its a bit stiff and needs more easing. move every jont in each frame.

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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Yeah, like I said, the beginning is an older anim.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Hmm, the lightsaber one looks good, but WAY too fast. maybe if you could make one somewhat slower, then it would be great. Your other ones are ok, but they are lacking some easing and flow. The story lines are also good, but might need some work..
    courtesy? :3
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Everyone says its too fast, but to me it looks too slow...
    maybe its just slow on this crappy slow laptop.
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    Re: some of my stuff.

    Finally an update people!
    I'm workin' on a ninja animaton that is taking forever,
    but in the meantime...

    We have JUMP


    and ragnell sword test.
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