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    Scimitar's Thread

    [center:36lidzkq]Hello, and welcome to my thread! Please comment, and tell me what I need to work on to become a better animator!
    I will return courtesy if the comment is good, and not like "Cool, Courtesy?"
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    Newest Animations
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    [center:36lidzkq][img]http://**********.com/img/1277251561.gif[/img]
    DDBC4 Beginning

    [img]http://**********.com/img/1277245414.gif[/img]
    Slow-Mo Run[/center:36lidzkq]

    [center:36lidzkq]Tests
    [spoiler:36lidzkq][img]http://**********.com/img/1277253532.gif[/img]
    Blood Test

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    3d Test(A little too fast)[/spoiler:36lidzkq][/center:36lidzkq]
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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    basicly you need to put more sooth and more easing.... make long animations becuse its so lillte.. put more backgrounds and read baha's tutorial ^^

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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    Update
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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    they're pretty good for someone who is new, but your animations(especially the top one) are shaky and also stiff, this can be fixed pretty easily though if you ust move all the joints in each frame and myabe check out a coupl tuts in the tutorial section(Darren's tutorial is very good for beginners)
    E:Courtesy? if you want to(its when you comment on my thread because I commented on yours)

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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Kilroy
    they're pretty good for someone who is new, but your animations(especially the top one) are shaky and also stiff, this can be fixed pretty easily though if you ust move all the joints in each frame and myabe check out a coupl tuts in the tutorial section(Darren's tutorial is very good for beginners)
    The top one was supposed to be stiff as he was going in the air, but after that I thought i did pretty good on not being stiff. But besides that, thanks for the comment. I will work on everything.
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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    New Update, Blood Test!
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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    The Blood Test isn't very good... I know the blood is pretty hard to animate, but the arm... when it falls it bounces so weird it looks like it's alive...
    The 3D Test wasn't too bad... you could've eased a little better, though...
    You need to work on getting rid of the shakiness. Easing and the foot placement you're not very bad at, so keep it up.

    Courtesy?

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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by TheDoubleGenius
    The Blood Test isn't very good... I know the blood is pretty hard to animate, but the arm... when it falls it bounces so weird it looks like it's alive...
    The 3D Test wasn't too bad... you could've eased a little better, though...
    You need to work on getting rid of the shakiness. Easing and the foot placement you're not very bad at, so keep it up.

    Courtesy?
    Haha, the arm does look like it's alive. I'll work on everything you said!
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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    It isn't letting me see the animations, sorry.

    EDIT- Okay seems to be working now. My favorite one would be the blood test, it looked very nice. I didn't like the slow-motion run though, it just looked a bit odd to me.

    EDIT- Okay after further studying the blood test, I have too say I don't like it a whole lot anymore. The blood itself wasn't THAT bad, but the big problem (as stated above) was the way the arm was animated. I now have come to say that the animation at the very top seemed to look the best. Sorry for changing my mind so much.

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    Re: Scimitar's Thread

    the first one i saw had shakyness in the legs, and all the other animations i saw had shakyness.
    to help stop shakeyness, keep focused when you animate. if you start a movement you have to keep working on it.

    courtesy? thread in sig
    Thread: http://darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f...83734#p1383734
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