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    [center:vvq8f1tg]Welcome to my Thread
    Here are my best animations so far.I like doing wrestling animations but i decided to start doing other stuff.I give courts so please comment.

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    Re: Update

    Wow i look the Dbz one...
    At the last one i suggest you raise the Fps rate up. Work on the Stiffness, remeber to move all joints at once. Easing is also inportant.
    It goes like this: l-l--l----l--------l----l--l-l
    New Frame: l
    Speed: -
    try some Flow too. make it loose.
    If you haven seen Darren's pivot tutorail you should it helped me alot!

    Med-beg.

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    Re: Update

    I do love your ideas and originality. There was a few flaws that could easily be fixed. First of all, when the red stickfigure jumped, he should have bent down a little more, because he jumped pretty high and you need a lot of power to jump like that. Especially doing a backflip like that. Second, when the stick was about to jump on the blue stick, i noticed the blue stick just went upwards even before the red stick hit him. That makes things really weird and really brings down your rank. Move the blue stick as soon as the red guy lands on him. He can't just jump up like that, in that kind of position. So, with that, Med Beginner. Very nice work though. You really have a lot of potential.

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    Re: Update

    Thanks for the advice

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    Re: Update

    nice man
    i love the
    swanton 630 and the airbourne
    i think in the airbourne he should have stayed in the air longer cause the move is like that

    i would not say they are of high beginner quality imo
    because they are to slow and also stiff
    very very stiff
    and they are a little choppy although that might just be my computer
    keep trying
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    Re: My Thread

    I think you are really good, and it's the first time I see wrestling in pivot.
    and I need comment on my animation(coutesy)

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    Re: My Thread

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    I didn't see anything MAJORLY wrong, just fix the easing a bit more and loosen it up a bit as well.
    The only thing majorly wrong is the preperation of the flip.
    UNREALISTIC!
    The way you fix that is to try the move yourself, if you can't flip then do the preporation and imagine the flip.
    So try bending your back they way the stickman does - in other words, I want you to break your back. (jk)
    For a backflip, bend forward on the preporation, and shoot your back back, just not so much to make it look on realistic, and then flip over by kicking the legs.

    For a frontflip the back should be tilted forward just a little, then make a mini-jump to prepare, and when you land from the minijump, exagerate on the knee bending and make it go further than needed, then jump forward.
    Now to get the momentum you need to comple the flip, use the arms. When you're about to flip, your arms should be bent at somewhat of a 90 degree angle ( I_ ), but make sure the tip of the arm is pointed back, and when you start to jump up ease just a pinch and throw the arms back, and ease when the arms reach the side of the body so it can tuck in to make a good flip.

    I like your ideas in wrestling and without using onion skin too, unless your are in a way, that takes some skill. I can see you in interz in no time at all! Keep animating! <3

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    Re: My Thread

    you should work on realism, and easing, and also stiffness, the movements look awkward and the guy getting hit in the wrestling animations reacts before getting it which is very weird/unrealistic.
    check out some tuts, and keep practicing.
    your animations are also very slow, but it might just be my computer.

    Pingu

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    looks good ^^
    martykillerman was hire


 
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