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  1. #1
    Senior Member EnterSandman's Avatar

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    ?S1001 - Lock For Now

    [center:ygynslww]Hello, im ES1001. Some people might know me as Entersandman1001 from YouTube or ES1001 from PivotSpace. Please enjoy my animations and give good CC, but i wont return courtesy for 5 word comments like "great job, keep it up! courtesy?" Enjoy my thread.

    [quote:ygynslww]Please Note
    As OblivionFall has also stated, all my animation piv files are available to download. You can as many stks as you like, and not give credit. But dont say the stks are yours, that is stealing. Please dont. Also if you use my actual animation you must give credit too.
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    Newest Animation

    Blood Testing
    Just testing some gravity, the blood is pretty unoriginal


    Best Animation

    Climbing
    My best animation so far. I REALLY like it. Note - This is in Pivot 3, so make sure you have it before you try to open the piv.
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    [spoiler:ygynslww]Blood Testing NEW!
    Piv - Gif

    Gun Collab Solo Failed (Pivot 0.3)
    Piv - Gif

    Climbing (Pivot 0.3)
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    Strange Short
    Piv - Gif

    WarZ - New Style Try Out (Pivot 0.3)
    Piv - Gif

    Lost Your Head?
    Piv - Gif

    Mr.Awesome Tribute
    I decided to make a tribute to my fav Beginner animator. Hope you like it Mr.Awesome
    Gif - Piv

    FFA - Random Dude
    My animation for the Olix Flix "Finish the animation" challenge.
    Gif - Piv

    Verses OblivionFall Collab Entry
    My entry to the Verses Oblivion Collab. I hope you like it Obliv
    Gif - Piv

    Human vs Stickman ~Failed~
    Gif - Piv

    Run, Run, Run
    Gif - Piv

    Alien Activity
    My first official past 700 frame animation.
    Gif - Piv

    Godzilla vs King Ghidora ~Failed~
    Gif - Piv

    Moegurr Attack
    Gif - Piv

    Trex Attack (Pivot 0.3)
    Gif - Piv

    Blood Test
    Gif - Piv

    Sky Obstacle Course
    Gif - Piv

    Fast Style 2
    Gif - Piv

    Fast Style
    Gif - Piv

    Explosion Test
    My best animation for 1 1/2 months!
    Gif - Piv

    Short Fight
    Gif - Piv

    Un-Realistic 3
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    Pro VS Noob
    Gif - Piv

    Un - Realistic 2
    Gif - Lost The Piv

    Un-Realistic
    Gif - No Piv At All

    FAIL
    Gif - Lost the Piv

    Underground
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    Ground Distortion
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    Sword Test
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    Godzilla Roar Tests
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    Gunshot / Blood Test
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    Falling Apart
    My first animation i posted on DarkDemon.
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    [spoiler:ygynslww]New STK Sig! (08/29/10)
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    [spoiler:ygynslww]Joined : 22nd July 2010

    Beginner : 22nd July 2010

    VIP : 24th July 2010[/center:ygynslww][/spoiler:ygynslww]
    [center:ygynslww] Please Comment [/center:ygynslww]

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    pretty good actually but work on easying but good
    courtesy?
    Just no

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    Quote Originally Posted by RandomFurry
    pretty good actually but work on easying but good
    courtesy?
    Thnx ill work on that

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    work on easing...
    but is very good, i liked the bomb


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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    coool anims i like em but try to eas more
    Just no

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    From now on, keep all of your animations in this thread- do not create multiple animation threads.

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    The underground animation was pretty original, which is good. It's what you need to get to intermediates. Your effects are pretty good as well. They really fit in with the animations. The only thing I can think of is that your movements are a bit too heavily spaced. For example, when the stick started to run, I saw him appear to the very right, and his back was all the way downwards. You need to have some momentum into that. Also, when the sticks arms moved, they just... looked the same. You should move each joint of the arms into different positions. The last problem is when he got up, I saw his feet kind of wedge around a bit. Try to practice on when the stick gets back up.

    So, with that, your animations are good. You just need to work on the things above, then, you will achieve intermediates. But for now, just High Beginner. Keep up the good work. ^^

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - Underground / Plz Comment!

    Quote Originally Posted by Tim
    From now on, keep all of your animations in this thread- do not create multiple animation threads.
    k

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - PLZ! COMMENTS!

    nice, spacing is pretty good

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    Re: ES1001's Thread - PLZ! COMMENTS!

    Your new one, called combo, it quite good, but needs some work.
    The kick at the begin lacked easing. I would also reccommend making the stick lean forward about three frames before he does the combo. This will look better. You have a weird way of doing your kicks. Just before the kick, you fold the joints of the legs together, and therefore it looks likes he has just half a leg. In reallife it is impossible to bend your leg like that, I suggest you bend it just about this much:
    (front leg)

    At the second kick, I saw something that looked quite weird. Look at this, it's from your animation:

    That leg circled with red, is bended the wrong way. If he bends like that, which he does, his leg would be dislocated, because he makes a circle around his waist with it.

    You need to bend it downwards, like this:

    That way he does the kick from below, so that he does it naturally.

    Your back arm was stiff constantly untill he punches. You should do more with it with every impact.
    Otherwise quite good.
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