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    Recon - High Beginner Attempt - Will Return Courtesy!

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    Don't flame! Constructive criticism only!

    ANIMATIONS!


    Orange Punches Green; Green has a seizure.


    Just Some Tests--I followed Darren's tut to make all of these. Am I high beginner yet???


    High Beginner Attempt; I'm 90% sure I'm High Beginner!


    High Beginner Attempt: Am I?


    Med/High Beginner Attempt: Am I one of those two?


    Run Loop - Easing Test


    Wall Flip


    Double Kick - I think this one is good.



    Cartwheel Fail


    Run Loop


    Up the Wall Fall!


    Rusty???


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    Re: I'm Back!

    You've picked up a lot of rust, apparently D:
    There's quite a bit of shakiness, stiffness, and not enough easing. The motion needs to fluid-ified (:P). i.e., the guy should do something else with his arms during the kick (bend them), should bend his back during the kick, etc.

    The actually kicking needs more easing, and he seems to just float in midair for a moment after the kick. It's bothering me D:

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    Hey man, i don't want to be harsh but, you need to improve on quite a few things. Such as:

    -Easing
    -Foot placement
    -Physics
    -Stiffness

    I suggest you read someone's tutorial.

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    Re: Recon - Up the Wall FALL!

    Updated with Up the Wall Fall!

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    Re: Recon - Cartwheel Fail - Will Return Courtesy!

    Nice, could slow down the fps. and easing. Other thn than NICE WORK!
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    Re: Recon - Double Kick - Will Return Courtesy!

    i like your animations its just the movements were bad and shaky and the flow was off too and try to ease more,fix them and lets see :P

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    Re: Recon - Double Kick - Will Return Courtesy!

    Double kick:

    I seriously suggest you watch a tutorial on easing, because the posture of the left stickmans right leg, slightly shakes at the end. You will need to ease there mostly along with the right stickmans fall. Try slowing it down and add more frames to make the fall flow...

    Keep on animating and you will improve.

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    Muwhahah!

    Okay, your main issue is movement. Try to do some realism. Compare you animations to the proper human variant and try to make it look like that a bit more. The kick for example, what are his arms doing? They are flying all over the place... Never seen that happening in real life, you get my point? Further easing is a issue. Since I'm sick of making the same schedule over and over again, I'll just recommend you to check Darrens tutorial and scroll to the easing part. I'd say Low-Medium Beginner for now. Courtesy?

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    Re: Recon - Wall Flip - Will Return Courtesy!

    Update!
    Added wall flip!

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    Re: Recon - Wall Flip - Will Return Courtesy!

    i think i like the double kick the most, the way the dudes head reacts from each kick is great and the spin is really realistic. The whole thing is just really smooth, but i think that's the only one you made that caught my eye, the other ones need some work done.
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