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    [Sai] kick

    Hello
    I want to show my animations.





    Wallflip+kick


    ...and something for fans of Harry Potter




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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    Your anims were pretty good but they were stiff and un eased.. well first off try to move every joint in every frame and try to ease more easing goes like this I-I--I---I--I-I . well hope that helps and take a look at darrens tut at tutorial section . med beg.
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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    The top animation was good, and I think it was quite smooth. In the 2nd one, you could have moved more joints to make the kick more realistic. In the wallkick/flip, his land looked too soft, his legs could have bent a bit and the rumble effect is effective for situations like that.
    You have potential.

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    You seem to have a basic knowledge of effects and backgrounds, i think your movmeents can be a little akward at times, so keep trying movements and effects cause the way your going looks pretty good, if you made those backgrounds, can i say lay down on the scribblyness?
    Like it looks fine sometimes but too much of it looks a bit messy, im not tellling you that you have to or anything, i just think it may look a bit better without so much of it.

    Keep working at it, looking nice.
    EDIT:
    The backgrounds look fine, i thought there was more than that, so ignore the bold part.

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    @Vagic
    Thank you, it's nice. I will try to correct these mistakes in next animations. I need help from better animators than me.

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    To be honest, you dont need help from BETTER animators, even people your level could help you by just talking about pivot with you, and you might learn some other techniques, where as an expeirened animator may give you too much help and info, and then overload you to where you try things that are too hard for you, id say make a few joints with other begginers just to explore animation and styles a bit more.

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    New

    Title: Tripods


    Title: Punch

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    Cze?? Kamil :P, zbyt du?o df da?e? a tak to nawet ?adnie, pracuj nad easingiem i ruchami ;P

    Med beg for me

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    With the exception of the second animation, those attacks looked powerful. Courtesy?

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    Re: [Sai] Please rank me ;)

    @BolteuZz
    Jestem pewny ?e kto? z PBP Tylko kto? Dzi?ki

    @DarkWu
    Thank You for comment If You can, let me know how You rate me.

    Sincerely
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