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    LoLiLoL's

    So. If i understand correctly, i have to post my animation topic here.

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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    I like it
    But he looks like he id dragging something along behind him so u could work on that
    Other than that u are off to a good start xD
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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    The foot placement looks a little off, work on that. Since I see no other animations, I'd say medium beginner is your rank, for now.
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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    This is good. He looks like he is walking realistically, but it seems he is tied to a rope dragging a train. I would suggest not making him lean so much, but other than that, this is good. Welcome to your worst nightmare. I meant Darkdemon, of course.

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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    Quote Originally Posted by DarkWu
    This is good. He looks like he is walking realistically, but it seems he is tied to a rope dragging a train. I would suggest not making him lean so much, but other than that, this is good. Welcome to your worst nightmare. I meant me, of course.
    fixed it!

    welcome to dd, DaXeno. you are very good for a beginner, based on that animation. it reminds me of stickid's walking. it was very smooth and well eased, but it lacked flow. and did you make that base yourself? it is quite nice. keep it up!
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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    Nice job on easing. It looks odd though, because he's leaning so far forward. Don't bend the back as much. But that upper body movement could be used in a run. Courtesy?
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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    Thx for comments. =D

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    Re: LoLiLoL's

    His arms would have gave out and he would have fell if he bent that much. I suggest going about 110 degrees next time. But it still looks good. (:


 

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