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    Old Newbie HibariKing's Avatar
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    Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    Yo, i am a newbie well not really i used to be on here as The Black Spark but i havent been on or done pivot in FOREVER so im starting anew Enjoy

    Star Attack!:


    Punch/Jumpkick Combo:


    so feedback and CC would beGreatly Appreciated

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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D punch/kick combo :D

    Nice animations .. Look at the Tutorials

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    Old Newbie HibariKing's Avatar
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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    ~~~UPDATE~~~

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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D punch/kick combo :D

    Quote Originally Posted by MoRtAl
    Nice animations .. Look at the Tutorials
    Haha great CC there.

    First off let me say welcome back to darkdemon.
    Your "Punch/Jumpkick Combo" was good, although stiff in the back joints at the end. And liked your "Star Attack!" animation, it's very creative, and I can see some easing. You just need to work on basics, stiffness, physics, stuff like that. You can get a lot of help from the tutorials section, as the guy above me said.

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    Old Newbie HibariKing's Avatar
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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    Quote Originally Posted by too_anonymous
    Quote Originally Posted by MoRtAl
    Nice animations .. Look at the Tutorials
    Haha great CC there.

    First off let me say welcome back to darkdemon.
    Your "Punch/Jumpkick Combo" was good, although stiff in the back joints at the end. And liked your "Star Attack!" animation, it's very creative, and I can see some easing. You just need to work on basics, stiffness, physics, stuff like that. You can get a lot of help from the tutorials section, as the guy above me said.
    thanks for the welcome back and yeah as far as the other guys CC goes i looked at his thread and he dosent speak very good english so i wouldn't expect much cc aha as far as my punch kick combo goes, i realized the crazystiff in not only the back but also one of the legs AFTER i posted LOL and Star Attack was supposed to be different he was supposed to break through the first wall thing at the top but die trying to break the second one but i didnt know how to animate the wall breaking so i changed it completely, thanks for the cc broseph

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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    I don't know if you should be allowed to comment on other people's English.. _

    Anyways as far as CC goes I would say mainly look at lots of tutorials. Work on everything pretty much. The punch/kick combo was good because it wasn't very stiff and it had pretty good foot placement, but everything else could use a little work. The star attack isn't nearly as good as the combo.

    Medium beginner. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    Welcome at DarkDemon. :3

    For your latest update, stiff a certain point in your animation, but overall it's pretty good, idea, fairly well ease, keep it up!
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    Re: Hibari Pivot Time! :D STAR ATTACK! :D

    You certainly show a lot of creativity, but you should make your movements longer. like in the kick punch combo, when he lands, you should make his knees bend more for more impact. besides that, you're really good...


 

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