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    rank me please

    tribute to oblivionfall :3

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    Re: rank me please

    Great !! Med. Beginner
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    Re: rank me please

    Dude, you almost copied the exact animation, try something with your own stick figures more, instead of ripping of OblivionFall and calling it a tribute. Hard to rank you, for now Medium Beginner.

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    Re: rank me please

    Quote Originally Posted by daxternator1997
    tribute to oblivionfall :3
    Not bad, you really nice tribute. the movements were very well fluent and well eased for the beginning. The whole body braking up didn't seem to fit. for one that shot of the cannon if you were to have it have the power you have to be able to portray that power with recoil. I'd expect the blast of the cannon to have more recoil and cause the guy fly more faster through the air. The effects could use more work for the whole fade out. maybe for smoke give it more particle effect that expands and get's smaller as is evaporates. the blood was okay for the fact it wasn't there for too long, but the head before it went out of view, it hopped right before it disappeared and it looked awkward. also when the body landed it was well animated.

    med-beginner keep practicing. lets see some basics(walking,running,punching,kicking,jumping,combos) from ya to see how well you do with them.

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    That is mad, I think it is Med-Beg.
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    Its good I'd give you that but a couple things...

    -How and why did the stickman put himself into the cannon?
    -Also the cannon didn't move when it shot so it doesn't look realistic :/
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    Quote Originally Posted by Druidkoichi
    Its good I'd give you that but a couple things...

    -How and why did the stickman put himself into the cannon?
    -Also the cannon didn't move when it shot so it doesn't look realistic :/
    True dat..should've made it bumped up a little..
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