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  • Low Beginner

    4 28.57%
  • Medium Beginner

    2 14.29%
  • High Beginner

    2 14.29%
  • Borderline Intermediate

    0 0%
  • Low Intermidiate.

    0 0%
  • HIGH ELITE! (FUCK YEAH)

    6 42.86%
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  1. #1
    Old Newbie Scorch's Avatar
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    Scorch's Animations of Awesomness.

    Welcome to Thy Page.

    Newest:

    Just a little fight/ pwnage.

    Particle test.

    Other pivots.
    http://yourimg.in/j/mytv46.gif
    http://yourimg.in/j/7kyqje.gif

    EDIT: Added poll.

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    Re: My Animations!

    Yeah..All your animations are stiff in movements..work on these mainly :

    * Foot placement
    * Stiffness
    * Move every joint
    * Smoothness
    these types of things are the stuff you need to work on as a beginner..
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    Re: My Animations!

    Thanks for the feedback, I'm working on it.

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    Re: My Animations!

    your animations are stiff,need easing applied,semi choppy and unrealistic...
    but dont worry you'll improve
    continue animating ok courtesy

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    Re: My Animations!

    Thanks for the comment, Elite, I gave you my opinion on your animations aswell.

    Just a little update.

    Another midget fight thing.

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    Re: My Animations!

    I like how your logo appeared in from behind the blast. Nice effect.
    It was also enjoyable to watch, and was relatively smooth.

    Stiffness is one of your main problems - one way to avoid this is to move every joint in every frame. It will look less robotic, and flow better.
    Also, watch your foot placement; make sure his feet are planted on the ground, and not shaking around everywhere (keep in mind that just one or two pixels of movement can make a huge difference).
    It was good though, easily Med-Beg, so keep it up.
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    Re: My Animations!

    Quote Originally Posted by molten
    Yeah..All your animations are stiff in movements..work on these mainly :

    * Foot placement
    * Stiffness
    * Move every joint
    * Smoothness
    these types of things are the stuff you need to work on as a beginner..
    yes molten is right. I suggest you read Darren's pivot tutorial. You also need
    A) Easing
    B) Flow
    The easing was pretty bad.
    Some stopped and goes and some moved at the same pace.
    When the blue midget jumped kicked, it had a unrealistic fall.
    Like the force is with him.
    Oh hehehehe didn't notice "Like the force is with him".
    Anyways the run it was shaky, easing was slightly better.
    But the head and back wasn't moved.
    But i loved how you added effects most begginers don't use.
    Like the blue follow back or the red charge up.
    You have effects that most people don't do.
    But for now, low-med beg.


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    Re: My Animations!

    Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll try and churn out a pivot every day or two.

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    Re: My Animations!

    Just another run repeat, trying to nail the running motion.



    Edited it, hopefully it looks better now :/

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    Re: My Animations!

    The midget animation is nice. I like all of your animations but there are a few problems i see. I see stiffness and i think they are all to short. I like the effects on the other hand. Yet, if the effects take away from your skill you might need to cut some out for now. For a rank i would say med beginner.

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