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Thread: Tell Us More

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    Old Newbie paradox's Avatar
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    Tell Us More



    This is an animation I actually did for a class.

    It's to raise awareness about the dangerous side effects of the drugs commonly prescribed to the average consumer.

    that's a pill he throws up and swallows.

    This is my first completed animation in years and I was wondering about where it puts me.

    c&c please!

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    Re: Tell Us More

    Very smooth and flowy. A mouth would improve it tremendously though.

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    Re: Tell Us More

    Very nice flow I see in your animations. However, I also saw that it was shaky. I didn't spot any unneeded stiffness. As the user above said work on the mouth to add a bit more detail. Overall I say you are Med - High Beginner. Keep up the good work and keep practicing, man.

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    Re: Tell Us More

    That was actually pretty good, nice movements, kinda smooth. Looks a bit weird when the pill goes in his head, I'd add a mouth or something, to make it more obvious what's happening. Not that simple mouth you see in SFOC though... I'd try to make some more effects now, use some backgrounds and please stop with that font, it looks too Droidz.org... Make a own font or something... Anyways, good job, hope to see some more.

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    Re: Tell Us More

    thanks guys I'm glad you like it. I put some effort into it and am overall satisfied with it.

    I do see a lot of shakiness in the feet and will try and revise it but those damn feet are tricksy!

    I see what you mean about the mouth and it probably won't be too difficult a fix... perhaps tommorrow

    and yeah those letters were from droidz because i suck fat dick at making custom sticks(Which I know is no excuse not to start practicing!) but I made the Rx myself!

    and effects are the next thing I was going to start playing with

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    Re: Tell Us More

    Very nice. But like everybody else is saying, add a mouth because at first, I thought he was smoking some tiny cigar.

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    Re: Tell Us More

    the mouth is a small detail <.< the animation was good (Y)

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    Re: Tell Us More

    Stop bumping. Contact a staff member if you want your thread unlocked.


 

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