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    A decent animation with a cool stick i made





    well its not my first animation but its my most *physically correct one* XD
    feel free to comment or critic, its my first animation i post on DD

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    Re: a decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Good, but add some more reaction to the guy who is stabbed. courtesy?

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    Re: a decent animation with a cool stick i made

    you need to work on foot placement
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    Re: a decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuro
    you need to work on foot placement
    if u mean the stabbed guy, it was because i got lazy sry

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    Re: a decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Quote Originally Posted by Death Warrant
    Good, but add some more reaction to the guy who is stabbed. courtesy?
    Yeah, i think i should put more reactions on my animations, thanks btw what do u mean with courtesy? im new here :S

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    Re: A decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Do not double post.

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    Re: A decent animation with a cool stick i made

    You need to work on everything tbh. The stickman which stabbed the shaking "noob" has a stiff back, stiff back arm... (lol) and as the stickman recovers from stabbing the noob, he goes back and then foward, gradually getting lower. Uhmm, the stickman should stay level unless he/she is going down stairs or some shit. And the stickman which got stabbed drop like a sack of shit. Although i like the way he/she dropped it didn't look very smooth. LOL :P

    Basically Change the FPS and Work on easing, footplacement, spacing. Pretty much i'd suggest to look at a tutorial. :P

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    Re: A decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Errrrrm, For your first it was good, i reccommend checking tuts etc.
    Good job continue animating, Heres a cookie.


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    Re: A decent animation with a cool stick i made

    Please don't post in topics over a week old. Locked.
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