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    MagicCake's Thread

    Hey everyone, this is going to be the thread of which I upload all of my animations to. Please comment, criticize, flame, compliment, etc. I love feedback. : )

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    I liked the buildup to the punch, but the movements after that lacked power, and the leg just kinda drifted in front of him.

    Just practice some basic movements like running n stuff

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    Thanks. : ) I'm just trying to shake some rust off, but I should definitely do basic things like walking + running.

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    It's way too short, make atleast a combo or whatever.
    I guess this is like... 12 frames? max.

    You seem to understand the very basics. like easing and stuff.
    Just make something longer
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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    Yeah. I do tend to make short animations. Thanks for the feedback! I shall work on lengthening my animations. I suppose they are boring. : / But thanks! : )

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    are you new at pivot?? if you are it is a great animation for a noob :3 ... . i se error at the footplacement, and the animation is short >< try to longer animations (Y)

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    I'm not 'new'. I was a beginner when I last used Pivot, which was well over a year ago, closer to two. So I'm just shaking off rust, and trying to learn better technique.

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    Nice build up but the legs and the punch need easing

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    Re: MagicCake's Thread

    Thanks. : ) I like the build-up as well. I need to focus more on it when I do animation. Too much multi-tasking can lead to rough animation.


 

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