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    Junior Member Cell's Avatar
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    Cell's Thread - Combo 4/4/11



    Currently: Med-High Begz

    Begz - 01/25/11
    Interz - X/X/X
    Vetz - X/X/X
    Elite - X/X/X

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    **** - Good
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    My base pack is up for grabs, just give credits.
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    Animations

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    *New* Combo - .gif ~ .piv
    Combo, It was quickly made. But I needed to update my thread so.
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    Noob Vs. Pro - .gif
    I Like it, it was fun. Kinda twitchy and rushed at the end though. Credits to ForzaZorza (OblivionFall) for the smoke effect.
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    Joint w/ chaoswarrior *PREVIEW* - .gif
    Just a bit of a preview, it's gunna be great. Shout-out to chaoswarrior on the joint.
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    Reaction Test - .gif
    :/ I look back on it now and the reaction has a Major flaw, but the movements in my opinion are alright.
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    Flyer Vs. Runner - .gif
    Not too shabby. Practicing my air and ground physics.
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    --Older--

    [spoiler:2wl1yarm]Movement Test - .gif
    The Karate Kid - .gif
    Poison Bomb Test - .gif
    Combo Test - .gif[/spoiler:2wl1yarm]
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    Re: Cell's Thread


    not bad, you demonstrate a nice first effect. thought I'd suggest using more elaborate design for the smoke effect instead of circles. other than pretty nice test.


    Very nice foot placement was off a tad, but not too much. the blood effect was nicely animated.

    now its time to practice your basics. runs,walks, punching, kicking, combos, and of course grouping those together.

    low beginner for now.

    curtz returned.

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    Re: Cell's Thread

    I basically agree with what was said above - your foot placement needs some work. However, I would say that effect was a great try for a beginner of your level - I see a lot of potential. I deem you Mid Beginner...maybe. Try to work on spacing, foot placement and easing for now.

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    Edit : Oops, sorry, in case you didn't know courtesy is where someone comments on your thread, so you comment on theirs. But you don't have to, I don't mind.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    Thanks guys.
    and yeash, i do know what curtz are.

    i will improve.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    There aren't many movements to really see, as the camera changes so often. From what I can see, it looks fairly decent. The main flaw I see is the stiffness, this can be remedied by moving the back joint every frame necessary. You seem to have a basic idea of what to do.
    Medium beginner. Keep it up, because you are quite close to low beginner.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    Thanks for the input.
    I'll work harder on my back bending.

    Cheers.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    Your animations are good bro, but like everybody said, you must work on your feetplacement and the easing ... .. .
    and one thing i say to everybody here, Make longer animations :3

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    Re: Cell's Thread

    The detail you put into your animation was very impressive, and your movements were good, but something I'd like to suggest: Instead of putting words in place of an action, for example: "SLASH!", actually animate the action being done. In my opinion, your animation lost a bit of quality because you didn't actually animate the slash, but instead wrote it with text.

    I would really suggest you work on foot placement throughout your animations, maybe put a little particle on the feet joints so you know where the foot was in the last frame and you can keep track it.

    Other than that, really good job on the animations, keep it up!
    If you find the time, courtesy would be much appreciated.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    Thanks Everyone!
    I will work on foot placement, and stiffness.
    New animations soon.
    Cheers.
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    Re: Cell's Thread

    Helloo.
    I Actually liked your latest.
    Some foot shakyness but not that bad. I don't like the pose where he is before he jumps.
    It's really hard to rate you becouse it didn't have much movement but i don't think you'r as bad as you where in the punc punc thinggy. so i guess you are med-high beg, but we will know for sure when you make some thing with clear movements.

    You can courts me if you like its not neccecary.
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