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    Fresh Newbie Dakotai's Avatar
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    Dakotai's Thread

    Hey guys here r some anims. Plz rank.

    http://yourimg.in/j/46q34o.gif

    http://yourimg.in/j/207o71.gif

    Color messed up on the tree when i uploaded it

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    The first one had pretty warm and gorgeous colors. The effects were nice and the smoke was pretty basic, yet pretty good. The easing, foot placement and flowing were pretty bad after the first scene. I'd recommend using markers for a perfect foot placement, or an invisible floor.
    The second one was pretty smooth and fluid, but the frame-rate is a bit small.

    Overall, I'd say Med-Beginner. All you need to work on is stiffness, flowing, and maybe tweak the easing a bit.

    ~Sharp

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    Thanks, but i dont understand what flow is. Can u plz explain.

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    flow is basically making it look smooth and realistic
    also try working on your easing

    courtesy?

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    I like your background on the first one, and also the effects, just try to work on your spacing and easing, as the arms seemed abit weird. Also in the run I think it would look better a bit faster. But good job anyway!
    Courtz?

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    Thanks guys I will try to improve on what you guys told me

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    Re: Dakotai's Thread

    Update
    Naruto vs Sasuke Old
    http://yourimg.in/j/o61hk1i.gif
    Another Sig Fight
    http://yourimg.in/j/k2zgmr7.gif

    Plz comment. Second one's color got messed up


 

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