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    Daios Thread

    Well i have this Two New Animations that i made Today take a look
    Double Punch Test

    And this, Punch Test

    What the F**k

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    Re: Daios Thread

    I liked it but try to easing ^^

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    Re: Daios Thread

    update!!!!!

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    Re: Daios Thread

    You've got alot of work to do. First things first, foot placement, when he took the steps the legs slid way too much, making it look amateur. Make it seem more like a step by having him move forward and keeping the foot in the same place. Second, power. You showed him build some anticipation, so that's a start, but you need the punch to spring out faster to add more power to it. Over all I'd say you are in fact a low beginner, but if you fix these issues you will improve.

    PS: this doesn't just apply to punches, you should keep this in mind for animating most things. Check out baha's tutorial in the tutorial section, it helped me a shit ton when I was your level. And finally, keep practicing.

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    Re: Daios Thread

    if i were you id try easing and moving every joint in every frame
    also work on your foot placement
    low-med begs

    courtesy?

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    Re: Daios Thread

    Ok i'll try that

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    Re: Daios Thread

    Animation 1: In this animated glide leg. In addition, it is very choppy. In addition, you must move all the points on the human body. Animation 2: The same error. Animation 3: The same error, plus the ball flew unrealistic.
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    watch the legs.otherwise those anims would of been great.waiting for new ones i will give you a cookie if you fix the legs :3
    viewtopic.php?f=2&t=83417 please visit mah channel i return courtesy

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    Re: Daios Thread

    First off, DONT POST THE ANIMATIONS THAT WAY, Give links. Lag-less, hate-less.

    Then realism. None bends that much when punching, or the opponent would for sure laugh to them.
    Foot placement, sucks. Work on it abit.

    WTF was a funny idea, but it lacked alot of stuff. The gesture the person held, the movement, (It was
    going with the same speed all the time, it did not change at all, e.g. in the beginning.) the way the text just popped in and off, and if I just would want to be an ass Id make tons of more things...

    Some simple stuff you should work on, which would make you look ALOT better :

    -Realism
    -Easing

    Thanks.


 

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