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  1. #1
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    chaoswarriors' shit [Updated 24/02]

    [center:9bl1101k]I'm chaoswarrior and these, are my animations.

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    I Can Float
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    Nice first animation, very flow.
    i think you need to work on some minor stiffness.
    i also think you should have made the other stkmn in the animation move alittle.
    he looks rather stiff.
    aside from that, ur very good. and i can't wait to see more,

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    EDIT: you are Med-High Begs
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    Stiffness? What body part and where abouts in the animation?
    I agree with the fact I probably should have moved the other figure, ah well. Nevermind eh. Thanks.
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    Quote Originally Posted by chaoswarrior
    Stiffness? What body part and where abouts in the animation?
    I agree with the fact I probably should have moved the other figure, ah well. Nevermind eh. Thanks.
    sorry, in all aspects of your stkmn. i notice some flinchyness in the punches and kicks that needs alittle improvement. and the back joint are flow but need a tiny bit of extra bending.
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    To be honest I disagree, I think it was deliberately meant to flow well, it's nice, I like it, in some ways a little unrealistic in parts, but I liked it. Maybe make a few more with some effects and different angles.. Just make the animation abit more original, but then I'm a beginner, so I can't give too much towards good CC...
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    The animation had a lot of flow in it. It was a bit stiff around mid-point, but it smoothened out more later on. I would say you are Med - High Beginner.
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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    You have nice flow but in certain area the parts are shaky. Try working with floor sticks. Medium and close to high beginner.

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    Re: chaoswarriors' shit

    Where abouts is the stiffness, and shakiness? It's just if you're going to tell me that there is, I'd rather know where abouts so I can go over it/ know where abouts my mistakes are for further progression. Thanks for crit.

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