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    MoRtAl Thread

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    [center:21fuy3bx]2x Kick + efect test[/center:21fuy3bx]
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    [center:21fuy3bx]Flip & Kick[/center:21fuy3bx]
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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    Good ones
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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    Your pretty decent for a beginner. I don't wan't to tell you every litle thing that is wrong, so instead i would like you to read this. It the best pivot tutorial. It will help you to get the basics a bit better down.
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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    Quote Originally Posted by Sorcerer
    Your pretty decent for a beginner. I don't wan't to tell you every litle thing that is wrong, so instead i would like you to read this. It the best pivot tutorial. It will help you to get the basics a bit better down.
    So many bad ?

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    nice...better than me i guess you have good movemnet and a like a punch effect maybe you have to practice more easing and flow but those animations are pretty good

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    well, i'll just give some CC on your newest.
    well, for starters, you can barely see the kicks, you need to ease the legs, after the kick, then step, then the same with the other leg. or you could do it a different way, like a scissor kick, do exactly the same, but with a change. bring the first leg up, and then bring the second leg up after about 1-4 frames later.
    ok then, the effect's were good, but you could add more, like dust or something, when he stepped aswell.
    or you could've added some effects with the signature, instead of it just fading in.
    now, i think that's just about it, you could maybe practice with you r movements aswell.

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    You dont want to leave a joint unmoved, especially if its in the air, try and keep every joint moving until it needs to stop. You have some nice effects

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    o_O Nice animations but Stiffness there

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    He's right, your animations are stiff and also quite choppy. Effects look nice though.
    And no, that does not mean you get more Cheerios.

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    Re: MoRtAl Thread

    i think flip and kick is the best one.

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